Where Freedom Finds the Fire

You'll find it in the crimson eyes
of a throwaway photo somehow frozen in time.
When the past painted us like demons
with secret fury.
And you'll find it in the smell of a burning memory
like melting microfilm becoming enraged

(gifted with the freedom to deny
first appearances)

You'll find it in the cedar smoke
of Tyndale's earthen cage
roasting in a bale of hay for crimes unknown.
Where the fire of his message burned mighty
through a thousand hungry hearts that day

(where ancient ink once again
took a detour into youthful veins)

You'll find it in the velvet ash
of a (just one more) cigarette
being flippantly flicked into December sky
for reasons unknown.
Where yellowed fingernails bear witness
of freedom to live and freedom to die,

leaving not an inch of space to analyze;
for the fickle flames - much like life -
waits for no one.

You'll find it in the platinum tendrils
of a Colt 45, that so quickly took a life,
in the burning heat of an eternal second.
Where curled fingers and steady stare
makes it painfully aware
freedom is a pitiful beauty, ugly as sin,
and as right as rain

(ask the victims of Hiroshima --- they'll tell the same)

You'll find it in the vermilion sky
blazing brighter than passion pure;
stopping the world gears, of rat-race routine,
and turning a thousand rusty necks Heavenward

Where minds silently unhinge      (for a moment)
And fear itself begins to cringe      (for a moment)

When faced with childlike wonder
blind eyes will see.
A rejuvenating spark
this freedom can be.

And you'll find it the explosion of ecstasy
like a rose blooming in tenacious time-lapse.
You'll find it in the Cherokee midnight dance,
being warmed by the tongues of freedom personified.

Where Common Sense no longer applies,
for when freedom found his heart's desire,
you know it was a compromise.

Losing his mind, and losing his life,
in the process of a martyrdom
for all things beautiful and all things temporary,
in its earthly essence

... where freedom finds the fire,
you can't tell the difference.



Written March 23rd, 2016
For the Where The Freedom Finds the Fire Contest Hosted by Justin Bordner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 6, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Timothy, Nice to see your poem showcased in Justin's "Where Freedom Finds The Fire Contest List." Love LINDA
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Thank you Linda! Sure was a fun contest ... I enjoyed it a lot.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Congrats on a worthy win Timothy..
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Thanks Upma! Very nice of you to say.
Jameson Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 4:26 PM
You've put together quite the impressive song here, Tim-- great visual descriptions sticking close to the theme of burning/fire. Also enjoyed the hint of mystery that your verse holds in this one-- great work...as you can tell everyone seems to hold this one in high regards, and it is very well deserved. Good luck in the contest, but a wonderful write either way.
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:15 PM
Thank you very much, Sam, for your inquisitive comment and encouragement! I try to have no expectations with these contests, and am just super-grateful for the inspiration. You have the right idea, I think.
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April 1, 2016 at 1:08 AM
"you'll find it in the smell of a burning memory...like melting microfilm becoming enraged"...wow, so many epic lines in this fine composition, Timothy. "Where yellowed fingernails bear witness of freedom to live and freedom to die" That's a memorable, hard-hitting line too. You reveal how relentless, damaging and dangerous freedom can be, the ugliness of freedom,where common sense is thrust aside for the earthly NOW. This is immensely philosophical,really a remarkable one here. Always, Laura
Hicks Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:31 AM
I am ecstatic you like this one, Laura! I figured you might since you have an affinity for fire. You understand this poem so well ... freedom without values and virtues is nothing very pretty! I find that Justin's contests always seems to have a vague theme that leaves the door wide open for interpretation ... it gets my mind going.
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 5:53 PM
and if this does not make winner list, I'll she bocked (lame spooerism for ya)
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:19 PM
It seems the spoonerisms are still running through you after your great win on the contest :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 5:51 PM
OMG, timothy, your mind is so BRILLIANT. Wish I could write this way. All I got going for ME is rhythm (who could ask for anything more? yeah, right). You and armand write so similarly. it's just amazing. The Soup is not the same when you come back around!!
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:13 PM
You are one of my favorite poets on the Soup, Andrea, so your comments and feedback mean a lot to me. Honored!
Rigoler Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 1:41 PM
I like the many allusions in this poem, Timothy. Your thinking mind appears to travel at the speed of light, the way you seem to effortlessly write. Best of luck in the contest. / M
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Thanks Maurice. Poetry is my best outlet for my thoughts ... in day-to-day life I can get distracted quite easily, so it's a compromise ... ! Happy you enjoyed my poem ... Justin's challenge got my brain going ...
Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 7:15 AM
Interesting work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for dropping by and letting me know that I placed in your contest..Sara
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Your ghazal made me chuckle ... thanks for entering and stopping by to comment :)
Heemstra Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 5:46 PM
A very deep poem! Good luck on contest!
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Robert!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 3:46 AM
OMG! I hope Justin loves this one and picks it a top winner Timothy. It is truly deserving of the honor and I would love to see it POTD! It is in my book. BRAVO! #7 A fave! ;)
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 11:41 AM
I am honored by your spontaneous reaction, and praise, Connie! I love Justin's challenges because the theme is always so enigmatic, and it gets my brain going.
Fiery Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 11:21 AM
THE BEST POEM FOR THIS CONTEST... YOU'RE A WINNER WITH THIS PIECE... TRUST ME TIMOTHY...!!! WHERE FREEDOM FINDS THE FIRE... THE WHOLE PIECE IS DECORATED WITH ALLITERATIONS.. ( THE MOST IMPRESSIVE THING ABT YOUR POEMS).. FLIPPANTLY FLICKED ... . BLAZING... BRIGHTER THAN PASSION PURE... EXCELLENT!!!!!
Fiery Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 10:39 AM
I really love this poem....!!! Yes, i like fiery writes too...and trust me if you post a fiery poem... I WOULD LOVE TO BE YOUR FIRST READER..... HUGS Red
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Either your Caps Lock button is broken or your enthusiasm is extraordinary (I prefer the latter option) ... SO Happy you liked my poem, Red! I suppose you would like "fiery" writes ;) My alliteration is subtle most of the time ... I think Silent One is one of the best on the site when it comes to alliteration.
Warrior Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 10:22 AM
WOW...like cinematic man!...I needed popcorn...^WW^
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:45 AM
Thank you very much my friend :) Your support is so appreciated. And thanks for the humorous comment.
La France Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Tim, this is a wonderful write, freedom is like a rose blooming, exactly, I am loving this 7
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:26 AM
Thanks Constance!
Leiser Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Brilliant, just brilliant!
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Thanks Laura! I'm glad you liked it!
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