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Where Freedom Finds the Fire

You'll find it in the crimson eyes of a throwaway photo somehow frozen in time. When the past painted us like demons with secret fury. And you'll find it in the smell of a burning memory like melting microfilm becoming enraged (gifted with the freedom to deny first appearances) You'll find it in the cedar smoke of Tyndale's earthen cage roasting in a bale of hay for crimes unknown. Where the fire of his message burned mighty through a thousand hungry hearts that day (where ancient ink once again took a detour into youthful veins) You'll find it in the velvet ash of a (just one more) cigarette being flippantly flicked into December sky for reasons unknown. Where yellowed fingernails bear witness of freedom to live and freedom to die, leaving not an inch of space to analyze; for the fickle flames - much like life - waits for no one. You'll find it in the platinum tendrils of a Colt 45, that so quickly took a life, in the burning heat of an eternal second. Where curled fingers and steady stare makes it painfully aware freedom is a pitiful beauty, ugly as sin, and as right as rain (ask the victims of Hiroshima --- they'll tell the same) You'll find it in the vermilion sky blazing brighter than passion pure; stopping the world gears, of rat-race routine, and turning a thousand rusty necks Heavenward Where minds silently unhinge (for a moment) And fear itself begins to cringe (for a moment) When faced with childlike wonder blind eyes will see. A rejuvenating spark this freedom can be. And you'll find it the explosion of ecstasy like a rose blooming in tenacious time-lapse. You'll find it in the Cherokee midnight dance, being warmed by the tongues of freedom personified. Where Common Sense no longer applies, for when freedom found his heart's desire, you know it was a compromise. Losing his mind, and losing his life, in the process of a martyrdom for all things beautiful and all things temporary, in its earthly essence ... where freedom finds the fire, you can't tell the difference. Written March 23rd, 2016 For the Where The Freedom Finds the Fire Contest Hosted by Justin Bordner

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Date: 4/6/2016 11:00:00 PM
Timothy, Nice to see your poem showcased in Justin's "Where Freedom Finds The Fire Contest List." Love LINDA
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/7/2016 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Linda! Sure was a fun contest ... I enjoyed it a lot.
Date: 4/6/2016 2:35:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy win Timothy..
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/7/2016 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Upma! Very nice of you to say.
Date: 4/4/2016 4:26:00 PM
You've put together quite the impressive song here, Tim-- great visual descriptions sticking close to the theme of burning/fire. Also enjoyed the hint of mystery that your verse holds in this one-- great work...as you can tell everyone seems to hold this one in high regards, and it is very well deserved. Good luck in the contest, but a wonderful write either way.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/7/2016 8:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam, for your inquisitive comment and encouragement! I try to have no expectations with these contests, and am just super-grateful for the inspiration. You have the right idea, I think.
Date: 4/1/2016 1:08:00 AM
"you'll find it in the smell of a burning memory...like melting microfilm becoming enraged"...wow, so many epic lines in this fine composition, Timothy. "Where yellowed fingernails bear witness of freedom to live and freedom to die" That's a memorable, hard-hitting line too. You reveal how relentless, damaging and dangerous freedom can be, the ugliness of freedom,where common sense is thrust aside for the earthly NOW. This is immensely philosophical,really a remarkable one here. Always, Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/4/2016 3:31:00 AM
I am ecstatic you like this one, Laura! I figured you might since you have an affinity for fire. You understand this poem so well ... freedom without values and virtues is nothing very pretty! I find that Justin's contests always seems to have a vague theme that leaves the door wide open for interpretation ... it gets my mind going.
Date: 3/27/2016 5:53:00 PM
and if this does not make winner list, I'll she bocked (lame spooerism for ya)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 8:19:00 PM
It seems the spoonerisms are still running through you after your great win on the contest :)
Date: 3/27/2016 5:51:00 PM
OMG, timothy, your mind is so BRILLIANT. Wish I could write this way. All I got going for ME is rhythm (who could ask for anything more? yeah, right). You and armand write so similarly. it's just amazing. The Soup is not the same when you come back around!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 8:13:00 PM
You are one of my favorite poets on the Soup, Andrea, so your comments and feedback mean a lot to me. Honored!
Date: 3/27/2016 1:41:00 PM
I like the many allusions in this poem, Timothy. Your thinking mind appears to travel at the speed of light, the way you seem to effortlessly write. Best of luck in the contest. / M
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Maurice. Poetry is my best outlet for my thoughts ... in day-to-day life I can get distracted quite easily, so it's a compromise ... ! Happy you enjoyed my poem ... Justin's challenge got my brain going ...
Date: 3/27/2016 7:15:00 AM
Interesting work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for dropping by and letting me know that I placed in your contest..Sara
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 11:54:00 AM
Your ghazal made me chuckle ... thanks for entering and stopping by to comment :)
Date: 3/25/2016 5:46:00 PM
A very deep poem! Good luck on contest!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Robert!
Date: 3/25/2016 3:46:00 AM
OMG! I hope Justin loves this one and picks it a top winner Timothy. It is truly deserving of the honor and I would love to see it POTD! It is in my book. BRAVO! #7 A fave! ;)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 11:41:00 AM
I am honored by your spontaneous reaction, and praise, Connie! I love Justin's challenges because the theme is always so enigmatic, and it gets my brain going.
Date: 3/24/2016 11:21:00 AM
THE BEST POEM FOR THIS CONTEST... YOU'RE A WINNER WITH THIS PIECE... TRUST ME TIMOTHY...!!! WHERE FREEDOM FINDS THE FIRE... THE WHOLE PIECE IS DECORATED WITH ALLITERATIONS.. ( THE MOST IMPRESSIVE THING ABT YOUR POEMS).. FLIPPANTLY FLICKED ... . BLAZING... BRIGHTER THAN PASSION PURE... EXCELLENT!!!!!
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/28/2016 10:39:00 AM
I really love this poem....!!! Yes, i like fiery writes too...and trust me if you post a fiery poem... I WOULD LOVE TO BE YOUR FIRST READER..... HUGS Red
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 10:13:00 AM
Either your Caps Lock button is broken or your enthusiasm is extraordinary (I prefer the latter option) ... SO Happy you liked my poem, Red! I suppose you would like "fiery" writes ;) My alliteration is subtle most of the time ... I think Silent One is one of the best on the site when it comes to alliteration.
Date: 3/24/2016 10:22:00 AM
WOW...like cinematic man!...I needed popcorn...^WW^
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 1:45:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend :) Your support is so appreciated. And thanks for the humorous comment.
Date: 3/24/2016 9:00:00 AM
Tim, this is a wonderful write, freedom is like a rose blooming, exactly, I am loving this 7
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 1:26:00 AM
Thanks Constance!
Date: 3/23/2016 11:37:00 PM
Brilliant, just brilliant!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 1:13:00 AM
Thanks Laura! I'm glad you liked it!

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