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When We Were Young

I remember you from when we were young 
We never paid much mind 
To the mingling of our eyes 
We never said goodbyes 
To the moments we'd find 

We weren't much more than strangers 
You, with your boys to lead 
Me, with an oppressor to oppose 
How conversely our trees rose 
How distant our sown seeds 

You have all but forgotten the way we never were 
The way we never kissed 
The way we never loved 
Rightly, she flew free, that dove 
Rightly, that train was missed 

But, here I’ve found you in the present sun 
Your curls still yellow-gold 
Like I recall them to be 
There, under a willow tree 
In passing of stories told 

I can feel how you're wondering so quietly 
Not so different you and I 
As ages have come to pass 
Steeped in fields of grass 
Under the same empty sky 

Worlds apart have ways of closing distance 
Everything changes by and by 
When entrusted to Father Time, 
Perhaps words can learn to rhyme 
Perhaps our collision grows nigh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/7/2017 11:10:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, I ve read other poems of you as well but I decided to comment on this one, you write really beautifully and I really like this poem of yours, the imagenary, the rhyme everything was perfect, why did you stop writing poems? You write so well, it s been 4 years since you ve posted a new poem, best of luck and do inform me when you post a new one, one more thing, do me a favour, can you plz read my poems as well and tell me how they are
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Date: 5/21/2016 9:42:00 AM
Andy E, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 8/10/2013 6:50:00 AM
Beautiful, well done. A nice change from 'the way we were' to 'the way we never were' Loved it
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Date: 8/2/2013 11:11:00 AM
This is so good, moving to my favorites,7s all the way.
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