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When the Fish Bite

My husband met a fisherman (Or rather fisherlady) Who gave him some advice Which sounded obvious, yet weighty. When hoping for a fish to bite Your line must be real steady But patience is the key because The fish bite when they’re ready. A true philosopher, she was, ‘Cause it’s the same with living. Unless we’re ready, there won’t be Advancement or forgiving. Though choices dangle every day Right there for our decision, So many aren’t equal to The outcome we envision. Still, when we’re ready, then we bite, Our cautiousness forsaken Yet like the fish, we sometimes find That we have been mistaken.

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Date: 5/21/2017 7:09:00 AM
As a boy fishing was an almost daily thing during summer vacation, and with a homemade maple or cherrywood pole. Not sure about the patience, though. I agree, patience is a much needed virtue, though it appears to be very elusive these days. / M
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Date: 5/19/2017 8:00:00 AM
Yes...the fisherlady speaks from experience, Ilene! Being careful and patient is wise advice, but we're not perfect and sometimes temptation gets the better of us! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/19/2017 5:59:00 AM
Really good Ilene. The message is spot on and the analogy of fishing is perfect.
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Date: 5/19/2017 2:33:00 AM
Wise words delivered in your own unique humourous style Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/18/2017 6:56:00 PM
Nice wisdom, ilene, patience is always a gift that some of us just don't seem to have. Enjoyed reading ~*
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Date: 5/18/2017 6:47:00 PM
Really good, Ilene. Love the fish analogy.
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