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When the Bubble Bursts

Buoyed over waves of elation Marvel at favourable sights of creation Prospect for attainment visible Within glossy bastion, even trials seems agreeable Mollusk of endearing devotion, grumbling for denied favours seem so easy How progenitors of our existence purse their frustrations makes one feel lousy Reeking of corrupted souls, makes tastebuds sour to elixir Grafted as second skin blends to exude a new color Aversion so easily discerned when everything awash How chameleon spirit avulsed everything from one in a stroke of whiplash Hooters perched on the demise of accrued inheritance Consternation that needs to be shackled for their malefactor dance When plunder acknowledged for their vantage Stipends bequeathed as morsels to owner of the heritage When the bubble finally bursts Lesson that even if one's dominion life is not always just Monitoring in anticipation stranger's and dear ones alike by holter Affirms the old adage that blood is thicker than water

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/6/2015 2:11:00 AM
Powerful awesome words with delightful images... i love the stanza with the word whiplash .. excellent!~Olive Eloisa
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 9/6/2015 7:12:00 AM
Thank you. It means a lot to me
Date: 9/4/2015 4:32:00 PM
This poem is like a slide show on power point....you project thoughts in semi-abstract style and leave it to us to ponder on. Brushing up on rhyme can give these lines a smoother flow. Language and vocabulary are commendable. ~ All the best. // paul
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 9/4/2015 9:31:00 PM
Thanks. I'll take care of this in my future writes.
Date: 9/3/2015 9:33:00 PM
you are quite a writer. bursting with imagery! i love the ending of this one.
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 9/4/2015 3:08:00 PM
I believe reality has more spice than fantasy.
Date: 9/3/2015 5:16:00 AM
you look deep into the world Samiah
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 9/3/2015 7:27:00 AM
Wealth of experiences does that to you. Thanks dear, keep in touch.
Date: 8/29/2015 11:12:00 AM
Wonderful write a 7 ; have a wonderful weekend Hugs Eve
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/31/2015 10:31:00 PM
For me, this one is straight from the heart.
Date: 8/27/2015 12:24:00 PM
blood call it tomatoes
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/27/2015 1:01:00 PM
These expressions are of this world and indeed they exist. I appreciate your suggestion " love your words".
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Catherine Labeau
Date: 8/27/2015 12:57:00 PM
well eat spaghetti slightly crazy i do not judge but write a bundle that is all in a free world and love your words
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/27/2015 12:33:00 PM
Hello dear, but can you explain your comment. I don't understand
Date: 8/24/2015 12:10:00 PM
I like your unusual use of similes and metaphors, like "mollusk of endearing devotion" and others as well. Thank you for reading my poem about poets not being published. You got the point in the last lines. Best to you in your writing endesvors. / M
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/24/2015 12:59:00 PM
Thanks. Just some humble thoughts

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