what a year

fan swirling the proverbial
not a pretty picture
all in black
the canvas covered
with no glimpses of light
chakras hidden 
from root to the crown
darkness galore

from self inflicted abyss
to rock bottom
desecrated by actions and thoughts
fear guilt shame
some anger of Self
awakening from a nightmare of horrors

when asked how he got from Tibet to India
the Dalai Lama responded
"one step at a time"

my own path has been been burdened
heavy weights on my shoulders and mind
dragging me down
torn hiking boots
with barely a sole
yet hoping for soul and salvation
laces tangled
still struggling
unpolished dust
shackling desperation

gift of being down and out
present of recovery
presence change
another chance of redemption

the chains of being
are loosening

a miracle 
what a year it has been

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Date: 7/4/2024 1:11:00 AM
You have a wonderful way with words Kai. It's great to read you again at Poetry Soup Cheers - Gary
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/7/2025 9:54:00 AM
Sorry for the late reply. Thank you for the praise. Yes, I am back, I had to sort myself out again before I was able to write once more. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 6/24/2024 5:36:00 AM
Hello Michael. Good to see you posting again. Your poem is one of angst, yet survival with a glint of hope. I remember you went thru some tough times, perhaps self-inflicted? In any case, hang in there pal
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/24/2024 9:22:00 AM
Way good
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/24/2024 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Yes, I am back to poetry soup. The last year has been dreadful, mostly self inflicted. But life is beginning to look bright again. Healing. It is a bit of a miracle. Sending you kind wishes, Kai
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