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We Ventured Out

We could no longer in our four walls stay! We longed to see the sun and smell the breeze. Seemed all around us Nature sang, "Come play!" We could no longer in our four walls stay! We ventured out one sunny winter day, and to the park we went to see the trees. We could no longer in our four walls stay, while all around us Nature sang, "Come play!" February 28, 2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/30/2019 8:46:00 PM

Hello P.S. Awtry, yes Spring is the time to be outside. Now that it is Spring everything awakes. Have a nice evening my friend.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/1/2019 10:38:00 PM

thank you Darlene :) ~ps

Noel Flater

Date: 3/25/2019 12:30:00 PM

take a walk, on the wild side, outside, I liked it. Good spring poem.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/1/2019 10:38:00 PM

thank you Noel :) ~ps

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/15/2019 12:50:00 AM

I am SO SO SO SO SO SO SO ready to venture out and see exactly what this poem saw.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/15/2019 1:03:00 AM

I bet you are! I hope you have a beautiful day very soon! :)

Jim Yerman

Date: 3/11/2019 5:39:00 AM

I love this and it's so true!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/11/2019 9:43:00 AM

Thank you Jim :) ~ps

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/6/2019 11:30:00 PM

Great triolet (Nature is telling me to stay in!)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/8/2019 1:17:00 PM

I love your comment! Lol :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/6/2019 1:00:00 PM

Nice use of the triolet, P.S., to frame a lovely poem! :) gw

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/6/2019 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Gershon :)

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 3/4/2019 2:03:00 PM

This is immediately apppealing. You have made perfect use of the Troilet format to convey a simple basic human need. Very well done, PS.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/4/2019 9:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Geoffrey. I appreciate your comments and encouragement ~ps

Lunita Blanca

Date: 3/1/2019 1:22:00 PM

Really like this Awtry. I surly can concur with your desire to venture out despite the weather.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/4/2019 9:30:00 PM

thank you Arbol :) ~ps

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/1/2019 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations for your win :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/4/2019 9:30:00 PM

thank you Heidi ~ps

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/1/2019 11:27:00 AM

Delightful, PS. Feels like spring.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/4/2019 9:30:00 PM

Thank you Line ~ps

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 3/1/2019 1:29:00 AM

Cabin fever kills, eh? This reminds me of Moly's little Mole House calling to him, in The Wind In the Willows. Odd reversal, but it does. A happy peace that makes me want to breathe deeply of the crisp winter air!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/1/2019 7:42:00 AM

Yes cabin fever! I played around with which line to repeat and found it interesting the different feel it gave the poem.. I tried the “come play” line and liked that but it would have to be a spring poem... Thank you Andrew.