P.S. Awtry Poet Triolet

We Ventured Out

We could no longer in our four walls stay!

     We longed to see the sun and smell the breeze.

Seemed all around us Nature sang, "Come play!"
     
     We could no longer in our four walls stay!

We ventured out one sunny winter day,

      and to the park we went to see the trees.

We could no longer in our four walls stay,

     while all around us Nature sang, "Come play!"



February 28, 2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu March 30, 2019 at 8:46 PM Hello P.S. Awtry, yes Spring is the time to be outside. Now that it is Spring everything awakes. Have a nice evening my friend. P.S. Awtry April 1, 2019 at 10:38 PM thank you Darlene :) ~ps

Noel Flater March 25, 2019 at 12:30 PM take a walk, on the wild side, outside, I liked it. Good spring poem. P.S. Awtry April 1, 2019 at 10:38 PM thank you Noel :) ~ps

Caren Krutsinger March 15, 2019 at 12:50 AM I am SO SO SO SO SO SO SO ready to venture out and see exactly what this poem saw. P.S. Awtry March 15, 2019 at 1:03 AM I bet you are! I hope you have a beautiful day very soon! :)

Jim Yerman March 11, 2019 at 5:39 AM I love this and it's so true! P.S. Awtry March 11, 2019 at 9:43 AM Thank you Jim :) ~ps

Michelle Faulkner March 6, 2019 at 11:30 PM Great triolet (Nature is telling me to stay in!) P.S. Awtry March 8, 2019 at 1:17 PM I love your comment! Lol :)

Gershon Wolf March 6, 2019 at 1:00 PM Nice use of the triolet, P.S., to frame a lovely poem! :) gw P.S. Awtry March 6, 2019 at 1:38 PM Thank you Gershon :)

Geoffrey Brewer March 4, 2019 at 2:03 PM This is immediately apppealing. You have made perfect use of the Troilet format to convey a simple basic human need. Very well done, PS. P.S. Awtry March 4, 2019 at 9:31 PM Thank you so much Geoffrey. I appreciate your comments and encouragement ~ps

Lunita Blanca March 1, 2019 at 1:22 PM Really like this Awtry. I surly can concur with your desire to venture out despite the weather. P.S. Awtry March 4, 2019 at 9:30 PM thank you Arbol :) ~ps

Heidi Sands March 1, 2019 at 12:59 PM Congratulations for your win :) P.S. Awtry March 4, 2019 at 9:30 PM thank you Heidi ~ps

Line Gauthier March 1, 2019 at 11:27 AM Delightful, PS. Feels like spring. P.S. Awtry March 4, 2019 at 9:30 PM Thank you Line ~ps

Andrew Fairchild March 1, 2019 at 1:29 AM Cabin fever kills, eh? This reminds me of Moly's little Mole House calling to him, in The Wind In the Willows. Odd reversal, but it does. A happy peace that makes me want to breathe deeply of the crisp winter air! P.S. Awtry March 1, 2019 at 7:42 AM Yes cabin fever! I played around with which line to repeat and found it interesting the different feel it gave the poem.. I tried the “come play” line and liked that but it would have to be a spring poem... Thank you Andrew.

Arturo Michael February 28, 2019 at 6:39 PM A powerful message... Nice write... P.S. Awtry February 28, 2019 at 10:26 PM Thank you Arturo :)

Vijay Pandit February 28, 2019 at 2:58 PM I took a walk in your sunny winter day. Isn't it lovely when we get a break with a day like that? Nicely done, PSA. P.S. Awtry February 28, 2019 at 3:22 PM Thank you Vijay! -ps

Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2019 at 12:28 PM - Out and play ... spring is coming soon :) - A lovely poem, P.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) P.S. Awtry February 28, 2019 at 2:14 PM Thank you Anne-Lise ~ps