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Vashon Memories

Vashon Memories A song to sing itself – A birthing voice, Shouting then whispering Of fields and quiet harbors Of blackberries and sunlight on smooth waters, Of boredom, rest and restlessness In tidal pools Hunting hermit crabs and limpets, Sticking on all fingers, Avoiding jelly fish and barnacles When pigtails and freckles Fly through misty bracken fern, Evergreen Madrone leaves, Hemlock and the Douglas fir Shading meadows Of green apple trees, Fat blackberries - Huckleberries red and blue Eluding nettles reaching out To leave their sting Then rest beside Old logs Wrapped in pitch Stacked up by mischievous waves To dot the shoreline With drifting wood Of mysterious shapes On pebbled sands Warmed in the welcomed sunlight And drink in afternoon tea Steeped in curiosity. My grandparents had a summer home on Vashon Island. We would spend several weeks on the island during the summer.

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Date: 7/9/2020 8:32:00 PM
How beautifully described, Sam. Those of us who lived close to nature growing up can really relate to this one.
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Date: 7/8/2020 6:42:00 PM
Lived in Poulsbo, in 1980, Kitsap County working in Bremerton--I've been to Vashon Island that was across the way from the later attended attractions at Point Defiance with my young family--you gave it justice, awe-inspiring visions here, Sam, and my compliments on another fine 1st Place win -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/8/2020 6:31:00 PM
Having read your lovely poem Sam, I had to Google where Vashon Island is. Sounds wonderful. Great detail. I particularly liked the personification of the nettles reaching out to leave their sting. Yes, they do that alright. :) Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:54:00 AM
Sam, you had me at "a song to sing itself" but then when you brought in blackberries, not once but twice, I was totally hooked! I loved how you referred to young 'uns as "pigtails and freckles". This island sounds like a magical, wonderful place, thanks for sharing your memories. Congrats on a top win today, you hit this one into McCovey Cove! Blessings ~ John
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:28:00 AM
Cascades of verses of outstanding beauty that fill the heart with a sea of indelible memories my friend, Sam. Blessings!
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Sounds like a fun time. Good memories are the best. A wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 7/8/2020 7:39:00 AM
Sam not surprised I’m am sharing the top spot with you!;) congrats for this top win;)
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Date: 7/8/2020 7:11:00 AM
Excellent imagery dwelling in memories--congrats Sam on your TOP win.
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Date: 7/8/2020 6:48:00 AM
These are beautiful memories Sam! I got reminded of my own childhood memories of my summer holidays with my grandparents. I loved this soothing muse. Congratulations on your win. Mich love :)
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:57:00 PM
Thank you for taking me back to such pleasant memories of summer on Vashon Island Sam. I lived in Seattle in the 70’s and it is indeed a magical place where peace and beauty resides. I loved your poem and I am saving it to my faves. Blessings xxoo
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/7/2020 11:10:00 PM
That is ultimately cool! So special to know we share memories of both Seattle and Vashon! I am honored that you "fav'd" this poem. Thank you for sharing your memories! Hope all is well. So good to hear from you!! Blessings and hugs.
Date: 7/7/2020 1:30:00 PM
Wow, sounds like a beautiful place to visit! Thanks for sharing, Sam. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/7/2020 11:03:00 PM
It is a very special place. Not only did I spend summers on Quartermaster Harbor but camp counseled in college. Thank you for you message. So glad you got to share in this special place. Hugs and blessings!
Date: 7/6/2020 5:14:00 PM
Happy memories Sam, bet it feels like yesterday. Over fork over Tom
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:58:00 PM
They are and it does feel like yesterday. In college I camp counseled at a 640 acre camp on Vashon. That island will always have a special place in my heart. Thank you so much for your visit and sharing a spot on the beach with me! Hope you are well. Over Fork Over!

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