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Unclaimed fallen leaves

Spring winds clean winter branches Leaves billow far from home A maple tree sheds its own in tune No one is around to collect them Flat and perfect to be pressed in a book Unlike humanity’s tree in March It sheds its leaves year-round We gather around its floating remains We mourn our buds yet unfurled We cry when our crimson leaves fall But some are not so lucky Some are unclaimed and unloved leaves Like dead leaves blown by Spring winds Ordinary as the ones that pass you by No one to press them between leaves They belong to the careless breeze Free to disappear from existence There is a terror in freedom Adrift and alone With no one to catch one from falling As our stems fail and we fall A human fallen leaf is a sad sight Sadder when no one catches them No one to press in a folio Place a gravestone as a bookmark A novel with pages forever shut Never to see the light of day Isn’t it better to land on the ground With all the other compost? All the leaves nameless alike Under the cruel sunshine Under the cool moonlight Rather than a maple leaf loved Safely tucked in a page Between nine and infinity? Those who have no one who loves them Those maple leaves unclaimed Make the pages for those who are loved Like fallen and unloved maple leaves Still making the soil we tread upon

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Date: 4/2/2024 6:13:00 AM
A brilliant poem and a favourite for me!
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Triny Xiang
Date: 4/2/2024 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanette. Means a lot. I think it's too garrulous. I don't know when to quit.
Date: 3/19/2024 7:25:00 AM
Beautiful poem, your love for humanity is felt through your words to seek better.
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Triny Xiang
Date: 3/19/2024 10:12:00 PM
Thank you for your belief in me. I hope to measure up day by day to that kind of love.
Date: 3/16/2024 6:21:00 AM
Ultimately, from me the poem suggests that even those who feel unloved and unclaimed still contribute to the world in their own way, much like fallen leaves enriching the soil. It challenges the notion of worth being tied to recognition or affection, offering a poignant reminder of the interconnectedness of all life and the importance of empathy and compassion towards those who may feel overlooked or alone.
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Date: 3/16/2024 8:20:00 AM
Dear SO, I couldn't have said it better myself with fewer words. I always love your synopsis. It sheds light on meanings I have yet to discover.
Date: 3/16/2024 12:13:00 AM
What a way to express, the way youv used leaves and trees as an analogy to describe human emotions is beyond impeccable and creative of you. So many lines stood out for me but the line that hit the most was about freedom, and how it can leave one feeling alone with no one to catch them. Ans the way youv painted imagery too is so very artistic and soul hitting. Every word woven here speaks volumes in the most resonating manner in such an evocative rhythm and flow of lines, so seamless. Fave it is
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Date: 3/16/2024 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, InkE. I'm heartened my poor rendition is one of your faves. You are one of my favs. I was heartbroken and terrified by the book The Unclaimed by Pamela Prickett and Stefan Timmermans. This book follows the lives of people who died alone with no one to leave flowers on their graves.

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