Uf-Dah

The young creator said "Voila!" His parents askance, said "Uff da!" ....the carrot a dong, ....the coals, all so wrong! He cried, "He's just upside down, duh!" ( ) ( ) (*!*) 12/17/2021 - For Andrea's 'I Need a Laugh Xmas Limerick' contest

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 3/23/2022 10:36:00 PM

This is a total cracker, Susan, a belated Merry Christmas, and a Happy New Spring . . . ; )

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/24/2022 5:28:00 PM

glad you enjoyed it ... thank you...I love spring and always happy to shake off the winter blues :)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/16/2022 8:09:00 PM

Very funny + clever. Your imaginative piece has a naughty slice of carrot protrusion. A winner in my books too! Congratulations.Brian

Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/17/2022 1:21:00 PM

haha!! thank you Brian :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/24/2021 5:20:00 PM

Lol! Your clever humor is numero uno, Susan. I adore your limerick and the visual, such silly fun! Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/24/2021 11:35:00 PM

glad it got you laughing! Merry Christmas to you, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2021 4:31:00 PM

HA. this was YOU? I was thinking a guy wrote this one . It's very clever, Susan, I loved the dong and wrong lines!!! Congrats in my contest and Merry Christmas, my friend.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/24/2021 11:34:00 PM

glad you liked it, Andrea...Merry Christmas :)