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Treading Lightly Over a Dead Poet

You flounce as if you were an ostrich fan all fluffed up on the page waving at posterity. I nibble at your chicken livers, occasionally swing from your bell-ringing images that dare to delight me, but you peck at words too much and those long pauses when you take a bow are tedious. Sorry to see that you are dead, when you were alive reviewing your work was a lot easier, now I have to praise you just to show I care.

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Date: 1/20/2025 8:21:00 AM
Fascinating. I don't suppose you'll provide deets on the object of your scorn and affection?
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Eric Ashford
Date: 1/21/2025 10:26:00 AM
Thank you, Tom, umm no, I must e diplomatic and careful or the same criticism might rebound my way! Cheers E

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