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Treading Lightly Over a Dead Poet

You flounce
as if you were an ostrich fan
all fluffed up on the page
waving at posterity.
I nibble at your chicken livers,
occasionally
swing from your bell-ringing images
that dare to delight me,
but you peck at words too much
and those long pauses
when you take a bow
are tedious.
Sorry to see that you are dead,
when you were alive
reviewing your work
was a lot easier,
now I have to praise you
just to show I care.

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Date: 1/20/2025 8:21:00 AM
Fascinating. I don't suppose you'll provide deets on the object of your scorn and affection?
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Eric Ashford
Date: 1/21/2025 10:26:00 AM
Thank you, Tom, umm no, I must e diplomatic and careful or the same criticism might rebound my way! Cheers E

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