Transients An Open Form

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

TRANSIENTS
trails
&converges
to
discover
relationships
&
values
cardinality

a
capricious
harbinger
 of wisdom
 embodies knowledge
in
a
basket
  of
discourse

the
potentcy of
experience
in an
order
of space
in a
tranient shelter
containing
the ashes
 of dreams

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