Get Your Premium Membership

Topsy-Turvy World

It's a topsy-turvy world Once-straight hair's now curled From a putrid drop does a precious newborn unfurl Pry open the menacing clamshell to remove a shining pearl Swoops in an airborne twister even rocks and boulders do whirl Today mere commoners become princesses, duchesses or earls Benders transform lumps of food into refined, delicate swirls But poor girls' dreams die in doughty aprons of working girls burying rich visions of fancy ballerinas who twirl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/11/2019 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Gershon :)
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/12/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi! :) gw
Date: 1/11/2019 1:15:00 AM
Lovely poem, Gershon. Your last stanza has a particularly strong impact. Congrats on your top win.
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/12/2019 8:03:00 PM
Apppreciate your support, as always, Line. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 1/10/2019 2:38:00 AM
A marvelous mono-rhyme that caught me unawares and surprised me happily along the way. You are such a deep thinker even when you are throwing down a whimsical write.
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2019 10:22:00 PM
Thank you for your positive feedback on this one...Worked hard on it, truth be told. :) gw

Book: Shattered Sighs