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Poetry/Ballade/To Which Image Should We Cling
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1640-954-27
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, April 27, 2024

For the International Contest, To Which Image Should We Cling
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 04/29, 2024

Eighth Place

 

“We have been here a thousand times before Memory erased, each time we begin anew Of hands held tenderly, we’ve lost the score Each embrace virgin like fresh morning dew To which image, oh dear soul, should we cling For each heart was at some point of time dear As we flow through life with zest, zeal and zing In all forms we see God’s presence appear” Contest Line of Inquiry
Often, I open my memory chest, and have wept and wept until I close it; I hold those sad, sad thoughts until they rest, keeping each face within me as I sit. I seek God's test and love him I admit I find that his image means everything; to his holy words I truly commit I ask, God, to which image should I cling ? I find my soul on a long nature quest, in a green forest that God has sunlit; my time is short as I am but a guest, oh, listen to the birds twitter and chit. God's love comes over me and I submit, and will flow through life with a song to sing; God is in the sky, wind, and stars gold lit, I ask, God, to which image should I cling ? Life is not easy and I become stressed, and I sink low into a deep, dark pit; but then, I hear God's voice and I am blessed, and my transformation to joy is quick. I crawl up into the sun bit by bit, and I am lifted by an angel wing; never alone with God in the cockpit I ask, God, to which image should I cling ?

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Date: 4/27/2024 1:42:00 PM
I found strength and comfort in your poem in lines like this one: I seek God's test and love him I admit. I find that his image means everything. Those lines and the subsequent ones masterfully dealt with the line of inquiry. I enjoyed the fluidity of your lines and especially liked the last verse: I hear God's voice and I am blessed, and my transformation to joy is quick. Best wishes with the contest & have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 4/30/2024 7:08:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the compliment and lovely comment, and encouragement, Constance
Date: 4/27/2024 10:50:00 AM
Nice poem. Love the second stanza most.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/30/2024 7:08:00 PM
Jay, thank you for the compliment, I like that one too, Constance

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