To Manhood In a Foxhole

The silence...
The stillness
Akin to shadows, long fingers reach
Warriors and I
Lie here in the hallow
Fear…beside us, beseech!

Where is the enemy?
Whispers seem to ring out
Lips from my fingers, keeps head from arise
To quell eager peering about

I am a boy
But, this night, man become I
I and my buddies…
Too young, aren’t prepared to die

Onto their arms I do grab
Keeping their lives from growing all too short
Then, echoes…echoes. ..Breaking the silence of the still
A loud shot! Reports….

The one…
Then two!
A hail of missiles, I bring up my gun
Dirt spraying from every direction, which way do I shoot?

What I do not have…is…
Time! Time to think
I throw up my machine gun, blindly, not looking…
Squeezing the trigger, RAT TAT TAT… in frenzy, RAT TAT TAT…spitting instinct

Adrenaline rushing, surging!
Beads of sweat freefall to roll
Fingers tighten, muscles tauten
Madness besieging to depths of soul

Then my redden swelling ears take heed
From behind comes most frantic, deafening scream
Victory, exhilaration, hopes of my enemies all relieved!

It’s Johnny who’s been hit! Red river flows his crimson streams
I’m sobbing; I’m cradling him and shouting “YOU CANNOT DIE!”
Then I whisper…come back to life “Johnny, please, Johnny please"

Unnoticed to me, the stillness returns once more and then a paper…a letter… silently
floats to the floor
It’s the words like bullets that hit me, penned from his wife…
“I love you so much, the war will be over in just a short time; make sure you come back to me…
Come back to me alive”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 10:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Michael. wHat an intense ending this has!
Brown Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win Michael in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 11:18 AM
Many congrats Michael for big win in Debbies contest with imagination at its best. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Devonshire Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 10:37 AM
War strips our youth of their innocense, turning them to men with the horrors they see, Michael. For me, this is the best one I've seen in the contest. It's going to my favorites. Awesome writing!! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Congratulationson the ninth place win in the contest, Michael
Onclaud Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 1:53 AM
a searing write; almost gt into a panic mode, michael... best cheers for the great win! :) hugggs
Turner Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 10:45 AM
I added u as one of my fave poets by the way
Sweetheart Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Dramatic and intense poem Michael.. feeling the personal of the boy turned man in throes of war.. my youngest son ..one of five is in the military being sent to Libya at end of this month ..he is 19 .. thankxx for your comment on my Dodoitsu luv.. it is a Japanese form of luv poetry or humorous poetry.. u can view under Resources on left of screen ..click on forms of poetry to see the many forms used on P.S. .. thankxx ..
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