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To Be Taken Into Eternity

Having been born in legendary Italy,a country as old as the stones of the Via Appia, made me recall the fiery image of Attila... the barbarian from Hungary, who dared to defeat the mighty Romans: by sacking their imperial city with clanking swords! Attila might have become the new emperor, if he hadn't abandoned that land he came to conquer, but golloped away...vanishing into the unknown: remorseful or giving up on becoming great; and some agree that he was as untaimed as a lion... with a chilvalry to melt any woman's heart! Many great battles were fought on this soil, fortified by faith,valor and blood: an Italy immortalized by Vergil, Dante,Davinci,Michelangelo and Verdi: a legacy continuing today; and I, as her native son, like to lead the way... to be among these and not vanish into nothing! Where I walked as a teen, castles rose towards crimson skies to capture my fancy and hold me in wonder, until dusk came with the tinkling bells; and sweet mother called me...her voice echoing,with affectionate loveliness, amid the pine trees and a garden of blooming roses; there, at the gate's entrance, she waited with flowers! From a tiny spring, flowing from the snow-capped mountains, I drank the purest water and saved some in my canteen... while my companions threw rocks at each other and told jokes; and none of us were older than seventeen! O golden days,return to vivid memory... when we are taken by reminiscence to renew vows of loyalty! By a bright lamp,I'll write these memoirs 'till morning, and whenever sleep comes...I'm ready to hop in bed,dreaming to be in Amalfi or Positano along the rugged coast of emerald... listening to the murmurs of the gleaming sea,so old, overlooked by the immobile stars and hear a happy mandolin play a serenade and to be taken into eternity! I'm finally there, retracing each footstep on a stony path, running through the streets of my fled youth; wouldn't I be happy to stay and find a place to rest? Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 6/19/2009 12:26:00 AM
I love your poem being featured this week and congratulations. I am living temporarily in Rome, Italy. God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 6/19/2009 12:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserve poem being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:36:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this interesting piece with us. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:34:00 AM
Andrew - I just wanted to stop by and say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:51:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Andrew. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2009 4:54:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on this fine write being featured. Makes me want to return. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 6/15/2009 12:20:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Andrew .Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/9/2008 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your Honorable Mention in Rhea's contest! Amazing write! Love, Shar
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Date: 7/17/2008 7:26:00 AM
The Pride of one's homeland is a very special thing indeed - Well written piece that takes one on a journey - best wishes and many blessings
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