To Be Or Not To Be

In Sonnet III, Shakespeare writes as a young man looking in a mirror and wondering if he should impregnate a young woman for his posterity sake.

It begins:

Look in thy glass and tell the face thou viewest
Now is the time that face should form another.

In my poem, I write as Shakespeare might in 2023. I chose a free verse.

TO BE OR NOT TO BE

see that handsome face in the mirror
you’re a wolf - long hair and beard
whom only a mother could love

mother may I stay single
or should I try to cookie cut another
just like me, a good looking guy
i know

my lady wants me for a husband, but why
should this guy not spread himself around

she’s wide open,
but do I want a kid -
one with long hair and a beard;
perhaps with rings and a tattoo…

my mother’s begging me to settle down,
give her grandkids…
she recalls the day I was born
the sunshine of her life

i do admit I have a certain kind of radiance
now I ask who am I
to be or not to be
the guy who adds a spouse and multiplies

1/13/2022
Shakespeare in 2023
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:29 AM
This was fun "you’re a wolf - long hair and beard whom only a mother could love"
Romios Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Best wishes! Shakespeare would love you Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Thank you, Pangie!
Proxenos Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 9:36 AM
I so enjoyed your write of Shakespear's Hamlet in todays words. Excellent, imaginative write dear Kim. Hope 2023 is going to be awesome and healthy year, bringing forth many of your wonderful poems. LOVE AND HUGS, JENNIFER.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Hugs and love to you too, Jennifer! Thank you!
Lawless Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 6:32 AM
....to plant a seed and stick around to tend it......or leave the field untilled and quickly end it...Nice job Kim methinks this should do well in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Thank you, John!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 11:22 PM
Very original, dear Kim. Wonder what Shakespeare thought of it. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Who knows?! LOL
Poet Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Wonderful poem/tribute for Shakespeare that expresses the deepest of emotions through your most creative words! Blessings to you my friend. Good luck with the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! Let’s see if the sponsor likes it :)
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