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To Be Or Not To Be

In Sonnet III, Shakespeare writes as a young man looking in a mirror and wondering if he should impregnate a young woman for his posterity sake. It begins: Look in thy glass and tell the face thou viewest Now is the time that face should form another. In my poem, I write as Shakespeare might in 2023. I chose a free verse. TO BE OR NOT TO BE see that handsome face in the mirror you’re a wolf - long hair and beard whom only a mother could love mother may I stay single or should I try to cookie cut another just like me, a good looking guy i know my lady wants me for a husband, but why should this guy not spread himself around she’s wide open, but do I want a kid - one with long hair and a beard; perhaps with rings and a tattoo… my mother’s begging me to settle down, give her grandkids… she recalls the day I was born the sunshine of her life i do admit I have a certain kind of radiance now I ask who am I to be or not to be the guy who adds a spouse and multiplies 1/13/2022 Shakespeare in 2023 Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 1/18/2023 2:29:00 AM
This was fun "you’re a wolf - long hair and beard whom only a mother could love"
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Date: 1/16/2023 11:37:00 AM
Best wishes! Shakespeare would love you Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 5:57:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie!
Date: 1/14/2023 9:36:00 AM
I so enjoyed your write of Shakespear's Hamlet in todays words. Excellent, imaginative write dear Kim. Hope 2023 is going to be awesome and healthy year, bringing forth many of your wonderful poems. LOVE AND HUGS, JENNIFER.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 5:57:00 AM
Hugs and love to you too, Jennifer! Thank you!
Date: 1/14/2023 6:32:00 AM
....to plant a seed and stick around to tend it......or leave the field untilled and quickly end it...Nice job Kim methinks this should do well in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2023 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 1/13/2023 11:22:00 PM
Very original, dear Kim. Wonder what Shakespeare thought of it. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2023 7:58:00 AM
Who knows?! LOL
Date: 1/13/2023 7:09:00 PM
Wonderful poem/tribute for Shakespeare that expresses the deepest of emotions through your most creative words! Blessings to you my friend. Good luck with the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2023 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! Let’s see if the sponsor likes it :)

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