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(Day 1) "O Wise Raven, Sage of the Skies, tell me what you have seen from your perch set on high." "Mortal Man, I feel no compulsion to reveal to you that which I have witnessed with mine own eyes. Nevertheless, I will relate to you all I have seen, so that you may serve as prophet to me. I have observed six thousand years of hatred. Humanity in its insanity hates without just cause. Your species spews venom over differences in belief, color of skin, cultural practice, political preference, social status and more. Observe please, the birds of the heavens. They are more numerous than the sands of the sea. Despite their vast diversity, they understand they are one. They share a common origin. They believe this beautiful planet is big enough for all. Mortal man, tell them to stop hating and to embrace diversity, to accept one another in a unifying bond of peace and brotherhood. Tell them, to love is to be free. I have observed six thousand years of assault on your planet home. You rape the earth of its resources with no regard for future generations. You plunder the rain forests, pollute the land, air, and sea, wipe entire species out of existence and engage in many other evils besides these. You believe you are gods, but no deity would foul its own nest. Observe please, the birds of heaven. They use only what is needed to survive. Excess is a thing unknown to them. Mortal man, tell them to stop the assault. Make them understand they must preserve this beautiful home called Earth. Otherwise, extinction is inevitable. I have observed six thousand years of poverty. Billions of your kind live in squalor, while comparatively few live in luxury. Many cannot feed their children. Are you blind? Deaf as well? Do you not hear the cries of your young? The wails of the hungry make the angels of heaven weep. Those living in filth die without pity. Observe please, the birds of the heavens. None of theirs goes without. They build their sturdy homes on high. Gusty winds do not dislodge them from their mooring place. Mortal man, tell them to spread the wealth. Tell them to support the bruised reeds so they may live and thrive. Tell them greed leads to poverty of spirit. I have observed six thousand years of lies and deceit. Your politicians lie with every breath. Your religious leaders sell opium-laced deceptions disguised as enlightenment. Your business tycoons advertise their wares as panaceas leading to ultimate happiness and fulfillment. Observe, please, the birds of the heavens. Their songs are sweet and true. They sing of the beauty of nature and of their relationships to other living things. Mortal man, tell them to speak only truth to one another. Tell them that honesty leads to peace." (Day 2) "O Wise Raven, Sage of the Skies, tell me what you have seen from your perch set on high." But on this day my raven remained silent. In addition, a white dove had taken its station beside him. As I looked on in wonder, both of them morphed into seraphs in an instant of time. Each had six wings, and their appearance was as bright as the sun. Together they began their ascent into the heavens, but the one I had previously addressed as Raven turned around and said to me: "Mortal man, all you have seen and heard relate to the sons of men. Perhaps some may take heed and live. As for the rest, the judgment from of old has not been delayed. Keep on the watch for it." It was then I understood. I had been chosen to sound the warning. And yet I felt unworthy to carry such a weighty message. May all persons of good heart take heed. A new world awaits the meek. Shalom *contest example

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Date: 3/26/2025 10:08:00 PM
This reads like an ancient text discovered in a dusty unexplored cave high on some mountain. I just hope there is some adventurer willing to bring the.message home to enlighten the bewildered. Fascinating write, Tom. Shalom Shalom. S:) x
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/27/2025 5:44:00 AM
Thx Sam. I deliberately wrote this with the Bible in mind, especially the ancient prophets
Date: 2/1/2025 7:33:00 AM
Mortal men, a warning has been given. I like how you use the birds of the air to repeatedly set an example to mankind. Humans have been vandalized, so has Mother Earth. Religion, politics, greed has stripped us from freedom and peace. "You believe you are gods, but no deity would foul its own nest." No truer words heard. I love how the second part was addressed. A chosen, who finds himself unfit to deliver a message because he doesn't think of himself righteous enough. Oh well! I see humility.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/1/2025 11:08:00 AM
I'm glad this resonated with you :)
Date: 1/9/2025 11:51:00 AM
You make a great prophet Tom. Love "The Raven, Sage of the Skies." Perhaps you should change your moniker to "The Raven." You speak so much truth which unfortunately, falls on far too many deaf ears. Kudos to you Sir Raven!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2025 12:10:00 PM
Barrymore T. Raven III, at your service
Date: 12/15/2024 12:29:00 AM
"Look at the birds of the air; they do not sow or reap or store away in barns, and yet your heavenly Father feeds them." Thanks for sharing
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/26/2024 5:51:00 AM
And thx for visit Mo
Date: 12/14/2024 11:57:00 AM
Wow, that's a really good example. Awesomeness! What a fun read, with a lot of truths. Thanks for sharing!
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/14/2024 12:29:00 PM
Your welcome and thank you
Date: 12/12/2024 9:35:00 PM
Nicely done Tom. All my best then, Leon.
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Date: 12/26/2024 5:51:00 AM
Yessir
Date: 12/12/2024 1:53:00 PM
Great poet you are. Keen observation. Sad, but true; if many would consider a intention to comprehend the destruction to self, others, and the planet..it certainly can be a better place. Thank you!
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/12/2024 2:27:00 PM
Thx so much. Not sure about great poet but I've got a decent chin profile ;)
Date: 12/7/2024 9:27:00 PM
This is truly impressive brother. I was mesmerized from start to finish. Blessings Richard.
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/8/2024 5:51:00 AM
U2 and thx for stopping by
Date: 12/7/2024 3:23:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this powerful and thought-provoking piece. I really enjoyed the way it intertwines the wisdom of nature with a critique of human behavior.
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/7/2024 5:13:00 AM
Hey thx much
Date: 12/2/2024 4:40:00 AM
Loved this inviting message, Tom! We desperately need divine help, and understanding of his message to the whole world. He has never ignored humans in their plight, just wants us to find out how he's been organizing his plan to bring peace and harmony to our earth! Very imaginative illustration-captivating, and hopeful. (I'm slowly posting more, baby steps... :))
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/2/2024 4:46:00 AM
Thx for dropping by I'll check your new stuff out
Date: 11/30/2024 6:13:00 PM
I share a lot of the same views. You wrote a very forthcoming and direct prose. Peace. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/30/2024 6:26:00 PM
Peace back
Date: 11/28/2024 5:37:00 AM
What a terrific write with a compelling message, will it be taken notice of however, we need humanity to take note, will they, compassion is sadly lacking, each man for himself and greed the order of the day - however, your message comes across loud and clear. I certainly agree with you and hear! So well penned Tom. Blessings Jennifer.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2024 6:05:00 AM
Thx for visiting me today!
Date: 11/27/2024 11:09:00 PM
Great write up
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2024 5:12:00 AM
Thx Phil
Date: 11/27/2024 11:12:00 AM
Well done. The message is loud and clear.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/27/2024 11:15:00 AM
Yessir and thx
Date: 11/25/2024 2:10:00 AM
Dear tomsz, Contest example? I think i would have ranted very well on this subject lol which wont go anywhere in your contest as your example sounds like one written by Poe especially cus of how youv used raven etc is clever, i can go on and on about politicians tho, as here in the sunny side its stormy too, and i think yes so many sell deception and lies and theres too much hatred, and its concerning how so many that preach to be good also do evil like abuse etc, which is so unfair for the innocent ones. All i can say after reading this is, that i pray that this world will be a better place less jealousy and hatred and evil. And more kindness empathy and compassion, would do alot good. But even nature too can feel the greediness of humankind and isnt very pleased, pleasure reading you. Sending you light always
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/25/2024 2:33:00 PM
Ps. I had written this for insta a while back but I thought it would make a decent contest sample so I edited it down for here :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/25/2024 5:10:00 AM
Good to see you back. Thx always for support
Date: 11/24/2024 8:44:00 AM
"May all persons of good heart take heed. A new world awaits the meek." Indeed, the meek shall inherit the kingdom -- I know know nothing...content to live happy with faith. Quite an enlightening read my friend. Thank you. And blessings.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/24/2024 9:32:00 AM
Thx for support Joe. It's the message, not the messenger that's important
Date: 11/23/2024 11:15:00 PM
Charles is right. Outstanding writing from you you do so well in prose.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/24/2024 5:46:00 AM
Much thx
Date: 11/22/2024 1:59:00 PM
Outstanding work, Tom. Great example too! All the best, Charlie
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/22/2024 2:02:00 PM
Hey thx much
Date: 11/20/2024 7:07:00 AM
Wow! You have done this so well, Tom:)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/20/2024 9:05:00 AM
Awww thx
Date: 11/19/2024 6:31:00 AM
An excellent write dear Tom. The greed of mankind has crossed limits and I loved the stanza about assault of our planet home, so true. God bless. ~ Ani
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/19/2024 9:03:00 AM
Much thx Anitha
Date: 11/16/2024 11:47:00 PM
Great Messages to Humans Bond of Peace and Love…Preservation of Resources….Greed leads to poverty of spirit….Honesty leads to peace… Have Good Days.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/17/2024 5:15:00 AM
Hello Anisha thx for warm comment
Date: 11/16/2024 10:09:00 AM
Interesting thoughts penned. Way to go. So you have a contest going on. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/16/2024 10:17:00 AM
Yeah I'll continue to work within the framework that exists. Until it changes. Thx much
Date: 11/16/2024 12:04:00 AM
dear Tom, this is a great poem. I loved it very much. Have a blessed weekend!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/16/2024 5:26:00 AM
Thx Mu and U2
Date: 11/15/2024 10:03:00 PM
This is an amazing work, Tom! Your powerful poem could truly be a message from a time traveler from an advanced civilization! I love the way the story unfolds, and the way it ends, leaving much to ponder. This is a fave. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/16/2024 5:26:00 AM
That's way cool! Thx
Date: 11/15/2024 6:32:00 PM
wow this is really really good, your muse is alive and well. Tom
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/15/2024 6:37:00 PM
Occasionally lol. Thx much
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