Tilting Decks

The year I became seasick
I lived in a bungalow on the edge
of a wilderness moor.

The sky and land
grappled together
for supremacy of my soul,
Inner dogs whined,
my eyes were portholes
where cats watched
the turbulent dance
of garbled mind waves.

I had to leave a wife,
but knew I could not swim,
couldn't drown, nor float.
I stumbled across high wind-woven gorse,
ghosts crying through my hair.

in the end,
the crashing sound of breakers
smashing against cliffs
made me vomit, I staggered
choking still
into a pathless night.

A cloud garden had to
wither and bloom,
toes had to learn to grip
ever shifting sands.

Time whittles,
it sharpens the bones of your throat
until you can consume
the stale and the fresh,
while riding a moon crazed
rocking-horse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/24/2025 4:31:00 AM
Ah, yes. the never ending "battle" to weather life's storms and calms...nicely done Eric
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Date: 4/23/2025 10:53:00 AM
Excellent metaphors, from the first line. Fave!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 4/23/2025 11:20:00 AM
Hi Kim, glad this one works for you. Good to know that the abstract images created mind-pictures for you. Best E
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