Get Your Premium Membership

Thumps To Suck

Her thin lingerie strap slipped on catwalk Men by the ramp hailed their eyeful of luck Close to chest she pressed the dress Her lewd smile didn’t show distress What deprived men had were their thumps to suck. December 28, 2018. Syllable count : 10/10/7/7//10 (Checked on howmanysyllables.com)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/2/2019 8:33:00 AM
Great piece Subimal. Congrats on your win!!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/31/2018 5:15:00 PM
cleverly penned Subimal, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 12/31/2018 5:07:00 PM
Ha ha, very clever, congratulations on your winning placement!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2018 12:38:00 PM
I'm loving this. It's the 2nd I've found and it's amazing to see this side of people. You did great with the challenge. All the best ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Book: Shattered Sighs