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Thoughts Thrown From a Pier

It seems nothing is ever lost but is transmuted, returns to another state or resurrects into something new. Take thoughts thrown from a pier into the dark water lapping below. They make no sound as they sink, resigned to their fate, becoming whispery filaments of what had been spectral inhabitants of the head. Long threads rise to the surface and float free to catch the moonlight, becoming strands of silver drifting off on an outgoing tide. Where they go nobody knows although they are more than what they seem, webs set to catch a passing soul and weave a lovely face into the tapestry of a dream.

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Date: 2/16/2024 12:26:00 PM
This is a great poem Paul. I found it captivating throughout its entirety. You described it so well that I could easily visualise being on a pier casting away inner thoughts . Great metaphor. Loved the imagery, ‘ free to catch the moonlight, becoming strands of silver’. I really enjoyed this reflective read. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/18/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thankyou Christina for your kind and thoughtful words. Pleased that the poem found a receptive ear and had something to say. Quite humbled by the feedback provided...appreciated. Regards, Paul
Date: 1/27/2024 3:53:00 PM
wow, this was a deep and thought-provoking poem, Paul. I loved the metaphorical concept of thoughts thrown from a pier. LIked: 'they make no sound as they sink, resigned to their fate.' Such layering in your lines. This is the type of poetry I like...it leaves me with much pondering. Outstanding! enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/1/2024 6:31:00 PM
Rather a challenging piece....so appreciative of the time and mental effort you have put into pondering the layers. Some poems just come out this way...have to figure them out for myself at times. Thankyou Sara...regards
Date: 1/27/2024 11:20:00 AM
Very pretty x
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/1/2024 6:24:00 PM
Thanks DD...always good to hear from you.

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