This Wanted to Be an Ode to Pain au Levain

Sourdough crumbles under my hands, 
flour thick on the counter, white haze 
same as my father used to breathe in. 

The skin splits where I score it, steam 
unfurling from the center like something 
trying to leave. 

I eat the heel first, next its soft middle, 
then the quiet between bites, imagining 
what’s left of his lungs. He was convinced
his anger would bully up, save him. 

He hated me, and now it’s just me 
communing with wild yeast. 

Hallelujah. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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