Thinning Hate

Try to ride this wind of hope
do not touch the depth with your feet
fall through and change your past
don't hesitate to exit but meet young you.

Trouble hunts the width of love
thinning hate hunts for attention
this is your reflection, not mine
just because i am truly blind.

Take away all that lasts and rusts 
to see all the rest fall to dust
nothing must happen this fast
just have a blast don't worry.



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