These Sacks

she would shock
she would offend
but in the end 
make simple her thoughts
like whiskey for sure  
her anatomy and more
momma' say 
these sacks

this bosom she tell it
took boy-childs to men
took those hands and taught them
to answer the demands
of society and love

one day brother say
you blush me momma'
when you say
that thing you say
what's that you say

momma's eyes surf the room
washing ashore upon daddy's face
then momma' smiled as if to say
oh yes, these sacks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/9/2020 3:32:00 PM
Nice poem with a sense of humor.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 8/19/2020 7:01:00 PM
Hey Franci. The things that used to come out of my mother's mouth. Thanks for stopping by............peace!
Date: 8/4/2020 8:42:00 AM
Mums will always inspire our words.. nice poem Ricky.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 8/4/2020 5:27:00 PM
Hey my friend. I can't believe I wrote a poem about my mother's boobs. Oh well!
Date: 8/3/2020 5:43:00 PM
She was an assertive woman who knew her power; enjoyed this one very much!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 8/3/2020 7:05:00 PM
Hey Caren. My mom was a hoot. Thanks for stopping bye. All the best..................peace!
Date: 8/1/2020 12:22:00 PM
I like your poem , mom in love with dad.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 8/3/2020 7:03:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Family will always inspire me. Be blesssed and be safe.
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