The Year of the Turtle

We carried it home in a salty pail;
the bones of a monster.
Freddy said it was an alien;
his dad had seen their ships
shining like sixpences
in the sky.
When we tipped the bucket,
seawater and bones slopped.
For a moment
the loosely strung carcass swam.
I wondered if it was a small mermaid,
or a mermaid’s daughter.
Freddy poked it with his foot.
“Look at its head,” he said;
“it’s got no teeth.”
That settled it. We agreed
it was a drowned space kid.
That night
I dreamed it’s leathery beak
opened and sang of
deep green star-pools.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:59 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
Ashford Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Funom!
Ferdous Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 7:46 AM
21 Lines, one stanza, free verse poem. A turtle is coming home with some occasional poking. Freddy should be more watchful before poking much; there are potential differences in treating animals according to attitudes. Those are not subjects of wishful playing moments. Good morning.
Ashford Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Tamanna. I guess Freddy may have been ignorant of dead turtle etiquette, so we must forgive him. Obliged for the kind comments. Have a good day, and watch out for the turtles!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 5:01 AM
So much different then what I expected to read. kudos on the imagery. Hugs...Kim
Ashford Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 9:07 AM
Thanks so much Kim, I aim to surprise. Hugs back at yer.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 7:19 PM
I seems your imagination was spawned a very longtime ago.
Ashford Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 7:32 PM
LOL, it's been marinating for decades! Thank you for looking in.
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