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The Year of the Turtle

We carried it home in a salty pail; the bones of a monster. Freddy said it was an alien; his dad had seen their ships shining like sixpences in the sky. When we tipped the bucket, seawater and bones slopped. For a moment the loosely strung carcass swam. I wondered if it was a small mermaid, or a mermaid’s daughter. Freddy poked it with his foot. “Look at its head,” he said; “it’s got no teeth.” That settled it. We agreed it was a drowned space kid. That night I dreamed it’s leathery beak opened and sang of deep green star-pools.

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Date: 11/15/2019 8:59:00 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/17/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Funom!
Date: 11/3/2019 7:46:00 AM
21 Lines, one stanza, free verse poem. A turtle is coming home with some occasional poking. Freddy should be more watchful before poking much; there are potential differences in treating animals according to attitudes. Those are not subjects of wishful playing moments. Good morning.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/3/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Tamanna. I guess Freddy may have been ignorant of dead turtle etiquette, so we must forgive him. Obliged for the kind comments. Have a good day, and watch out for the turtles!
Date: 11/3/2019 5:01:00 AM
So much different then what I expected to read. kudos on the imagery. Hugs...Kim
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/3/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim, I aim to surprise. Hugs back at yer.
Date: 11/2/2019 7:19:00 PM
I seems your imagination was spawned a very longtime ago.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/2/2019 7:32:00 PM
LOL, it's been marinating for decades! Thank you for looking in.

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