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The Sea Imp

The sea, precociously sails, toward shore. A curious imp of a child is he. The waves, like whirligigs, with laughter roar. There’s no other place i’d rather to be — where sequin splashes, touch the wind then flee. With precious charm, his true blue eyes foresee. With strong limbs, wrestles monstrous whales, and knocks over huge sandcastles, built with small hands. He blows on boats and slides under their docks. Don’t turn your back on him! He’ll wave his wand! Still kind, he stops, befriends the suntanned sand. Resolved to do his part, he trims the land. But role of dad — the king releases calm. The impish sailor shamed, dropped in time out. This pampered teenage child, hears preach from mom: “Draw out wild waves, from deep, to crest and mount!” Her misty eyes know what this life’s about. “Reign well, my son! Swells held up high, froth clout!” With thirst, I turned away to grab a coke, then crash, swept off my feet —the wave it spoke. 1/26/2018 Laura Loo’s Urban Sonnet Contest Rhyme Scheme: ABABBB- CDCDDD- EFEFFF-GG?

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Date: 2/21/2018 9:46:00 AM
great layout sweet Kim, beautiful rhythm and rhyme, and imagery too, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 2/20/2018 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 2/20/2018 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations Eve. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thanks, Tom!
Date: 1/29/2018 12:15:00 PM
You are an accomplished artist...this poem was innovative, captivating, entertaining and three dimensional in character. Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. This is a surreal journey into a fantasy that splashes up against reality. Well written my friend, Emile.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2018 12:24:00 PM
I appreciate your comment! Thank you, Emile!
Date: 1/26/2018 4:04:00 PM
I love 'sequin splashes' - great imagery. Your entire poem grabbed me. I was going to be a good girl and read poems, but now I blame you for my desire to write instead! I enjoyed your poem so much that I'm curious to read about the contest and my pen fingers are itching. OK, credit you, not blame you? Better? An enjoyable wave of a write, Kim - delicate, pretty and wrapped up with wit! Blessings ... CayCay (well okay, I'll read some more)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2018 7:08:00 PM
LOL, CayCay! Happens to me all the time! Thanks :) Kim

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