The Revlon Kiss

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It was a sizzling summer of electric blues and vibrant hues 
in  a garden full of flowers inked in plushy spanking reds 
a wall of buttress wood splashed with vines of green 
a purple morning glory with a touch of dewy sheen 
over by a mossy pond a mandarin duck of orangey blue 

The sun turns amber like a big fat shimmering coin of gold 
in a sky that often blushes fuchsia,  pink, by a cloud's enfold
emerald blades of grass behind a white striped skunk  
a gradient shade of orange, from a Siberian chipmunk 
here by the royal blue bench, a vibrant peacock fans bold 

It is a season of rainbow colored rain and red electric trains 
in a terrace full of trellises of white, roses bright as Spain   
blooming with vigor inside my bright oasis 
happily connected to a Revlon kiss,  
of  cherry berry merry, on a girl named Mary Lou Fontaine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/21/2021 3:19:00 PM
Very nice one! Love the detailed descriptions!
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Date: 8/21/2021 11:19:00 AM
Mystic Rose Rose, Crossed such a nice plateau in this trellis' dreamy 'sizzling summer of electric blues and vibrant hues'. Many count themselves lucky awaiting a kiss in such a garden. Gladly leave the 'cherry berry merry' marks on the whole day through. Keep bringing the colors of a Rose. -Richard
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Date: 8/21/2021 10:31:00 AM
Love the connection between the colours of nature and Mary Lou Fontaine’s cherry berry merry Revlon kiss. Lovely poetry Mystic Rose… Belle
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Date: 8/21/2021 5:54:00 AM
Symphony colors and emotions--well done, Vienna.
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Date: 8/21/2021 2:24:00 AM
Lovely hues spread throughout your amazing poem, Mystic:)
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Date: 8/21/2021 1:25:00 AM
Cosmetic galore. Sorry, luv, I don't use Revlon but I like it on the ladies. Hugs.
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Date: 8/20/2021 7:23:00 PM
Great poem, dear Rose. Your hues and imagery are stunning; from the first to the last verse, your words are flowing smoothly. Thanks for your visit and comment on my page.
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