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The pride

New red-leaf candles glow in a green room jungle cathedral; buttress-rooted forest-columns climb to a sun-starred sky in jig-saw pieces; wings stretch feathers over gravity; voices whisper, ‘Beware. Lions prowl.’ Smooth granite-faced walls build shadow-spaces, city-blocks; black-suited women, men, stride out, ground-starers, pacing beside the sign: ‘Do not feed lions’.

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Date: 3/29/2024 11:30:00 PM
I love the introductory imagery of red-leaf candles in a green room. Feels very post-apocalyptic. Poets, like you, are not ground starers with fresh meat in their nap sack. Bravo.
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 3/30/2024 3:39:00 AM
Thanks Triny. You made me smile. I'm probably a tree/sky starer so I have to be careful of bumping into things -and true, no fresh meat for the lions.

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