The Point Is This

Until a point is posited,
Its position is unclear;
Whether on a pencil
Or belief embraced so dear.

Until a point is set upon
A concrete place of view,
Its meaning is unknown,
Its validity not true.

Until a point is taken up
And held close to the breast,
Defended and declaimed upon,
Its measure is at test.

Until a point is proven,
Its fate remains unlearned;
It has no merit without facts,
Its placement it must earn.

Until a point is made concrete
There is no point in trying;
The point is this, it needs a place
To prove the point’s defining.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Good one, and a belated congrats to you!
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:09 AM
Congrats Deb on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
Maverick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 1:08 PM
pleased to see your placment today Deb, will look up your work, in future.
Calhoun Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Hi Deb - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry my friend.. u sure made the point.. enjoy another chart topper with luv and happy weekend too..
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, deb
Taylor Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Congrats, Deb on well deserved win. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Great job, Deb! Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Point" Contest! Love, Annalise
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 2:48 PM
Deb, it is not easy to write and submit a poem for this contest. In fact, I feel this is one of the more difficult contests I have faced during my short time on this site. However, you have turned the trick and created a contending poem for this contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Deb this is great ... enjoyed the whole premise of the point and u certainly got it across with this piece... good luck in the competition.. am still working on mine...luv..
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