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Before dawn light, there is a peaceful harmony. Even without the moon, it's still very charming. Stars dazzling brightness reflects off the heavy snow.  Storms that should be calm are making a ruckus.  The torrential rain had flooded the rivers. A waterfall echoes off a wooden deck. Fat raindrops pounded the roof, porch, and tree limbs. But the light hasn't dimmed, it's becoming brighter. Wet black branches weave remaining obscurity. Fall flower colors change throughout the year.  Trees await spring sprouts. Let rain rise from stillness. Raindrops pelt cracked Windows dew wisps puddle. Soft like a new rose. Giving her a pink glow.
Written: October 09 2021 Let's Mix It Up Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/4/2021 2:49:00 PM
Lasaad, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest, love the image ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 11/4/2021 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Constance appreciate your reading placing and commenting on my poem. Peace and kindest regards
Date: 11/3/2021 7:00:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, your exquisite imagery brings Nature to life in all Her glory. Your gifted pen is vivid and exceptional, my friend. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/4/2021 5:29:00 PM
Dear Susan thank you so much for your delightful comment and kind words, it really means a lot to me. Peace and kindest regards
Date: 11/2/2021 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "The Marvels Of Nature" is a beautiful/fun~~story/write. Wish I could pick some of your pretty flowers. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Date: 10/31/2021 1:27:00 AM
Great writing on nature. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/10/2021 10:51:00 AM
Night turning into day becomes a thing of fascination and beauty, owing to your wonderful writing, Lasaad. Blessings, Evelyn :)
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Date: 10/10/2021 6:37:00 AM
You bring nature scenes alive to the reader in these wonderful images, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/9/2021 10:28:00 PM
A great nature poem. Best for a win.
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