The Hollow

The October night was dark and cold,
As the autumn sun was going down,
When I recalled the legends I had been told,
About this sleepy, little town.

There were tales about the haunted woods,
They say the wind seems to call your name,
I was going where no one should,
And if I survived, I'd never be the same.

I walked through the covered bridge,
As the harvest moon rose into the sky,
I had made it around the darkened ridge,
Just as I heard a lone wolf's cry.

I walked the path of the dark, gnarled thicket,
Through the fallen leaves of maple and oak,
I heard the chirping of a cricket,
Near the hollow, where the bullfrogs croak.

Then, I heard the "hoot" of an owl in a tree,
And the "caw" of a raven on it's perch,
The headless horseman I hoped not to see,
As I passed the graveyard near the church.

I told myself I would be alright,
Just as I heard the hooves of a horse,
But, I knew I would make it home tonight,
Because there are no ghosts, of course.








August 30th, 2013

(This was my tribute to "The Legend Of Sleepy Hollow" by Washington Irving.
I wrote it from the perspective of Ichabod Crane.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 13, 2025 at 3:38 PM
I love your poem! I like how it give a new look on the original story of sleepy hollow were it only give us a limited 3rd person pov. Adaptation really gives the same suspense elements of imagery and story line, yet makes it seem like Ichabod it trying to convince him self that the story he likes that also had influenced him so much aren't true almost like he is trying to denied his fate. Truly a 10/10 poem :)
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June 30, 2015 at 6:34 PM
Kelly, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~
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June 28, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Great story telling! Congrats.
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July 2, 2015 at 11:47 PM
I appreciate your kind congrats and comments, Rick. Thank you!
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June 28, 2015 at 12:36 AM
Kelly, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
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June 27, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Kelly, congrats on your 1st place win! A great descriptive write! Love, KIm
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July 1, 2015 at 10:16 PM
I appreciate your kind congrats and comments, Kim. Thank you!
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June 27, 2015 at 3:16 AM
intriguing poem Kelly Congrats on 1st place hugs
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June 30, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Thank you, Shadow. I truly appreciate the placement in your contest! Hugs :)
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August 16, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Wonderful! Grats on your terrific win!
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August 19, 2014 at 12:24 AM
Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Casarah!
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August 14, 2014 at 11:20 PM
Wow Kelly it's heartfelt n wonderful, u really hv the magic of words! Congrats on first place win!
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August 18, 2014 at 1:14 AM
Thank you for the wonderful comments, Dr. Upma. I was very touched by your kind words!
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August 14, 2014 at 10:55 PM
Very nice Kelly. Excellent write, in deed, and because of that truth, 1st place you received... Enjoyed... Sending a hug as your reward, Verlena.
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August 18, 2014 at 12:57 AM
Thank you for the wonderful comments, Verlena. I appreciate it so much!.... I am happy that you enjoyed my poem, and I'm sending a hug back to you :)
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August 14, 2014 at 10:30 PM
Congrats on the first place win in the contest, Kelly
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August 18, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Thank you for the kind congrats, Dr. Ram. I appreciate it very much!
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August 14, 2014 at 9:53 PM
Congrats on a great win Kelly
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August 18, 2014 at 12:23 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph!
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December 7, 2013 at 11:54 PM
Kelly What a great write. You took the reader on an adventure full of imagery and imagination. An eerie story that is creative, fun, creepy, and chilling. Nice job Thanks for the concerning and sweet comment on my Bruised And Battered poem. Hugs
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October 1, 2013 at 8:47 PM
Kelly, awesome win............. LUV.............. SKAT
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October 1, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Really enjoyed your poem from my personal favorite author!!! Congratulations on your win...
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October 1, 2013 at 3:04 PM
It's a great tribute to that marvelous classic tale. There is a new series on tv now named after that story as well. congrats on your fine win.
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October 1, 2013 at 12:44 PM
Just a couple of hiccups kept this from being a number one rating. Line 3 verse 2 should be "'where" and line 4 verse 3 should be "wolf's." But, nothing detracts from the hair raising effect you created.... Kelly, you're good enough that I couldn't let you get by with these little bumps in a very smooth road.... Love ya dearly.... Jake
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October 1, 2013 at 2:50 AM
I'm still not out of the woods. I love it there- the sights and sounds of the woods!
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September 30, 2013 at 12:31 PM
Lovely winning poem Kelly... Linda
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September 30, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Kelly.- Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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August 31, 2013 at 4:33 AM
Your words are really melodic Kelly. Its few ever achieve such when writing in this form. I give you a fave for this because it is an awesome piece of writing.
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August 30, 2013 at 7:35 PM
What a flow of words creating the picture you wish to,
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