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The Grand Piano

She was a grand piano: grand in structure, grand in beauty, grand in quality of sound. She had captured the heart of every pianist who had come to play in the great hall. Once they touched her keys…they fell in love with the celestial sounds that resonated from her core. He was a grand musician, adept at playing several instruments. Music was what made him come to life…his passion seen in the swaying of his body as he became enraptured in the sounds. He came looking for her, having heard of her perfection, and once he touched her, he was captivated. Night after night the hall was packed with music lovers who came to hear him play, but they also came to feast their eyes for when he sat there at the piano…it was almost as if he were in the throes of passion. She made him pour and release his inner soul in notes that vibrated and pulsated within every listener’s heart. Passion redefined. His fame spread. He spent hours every day…sitting there on the stage, caressing her keys, making her do his bidding…moving her to a forte crescendo…and then another, soothing her with pianissimo after the storm of passion was spent. When did it happen? When had the restlessness taken hold? He couldn’t remember a specific moment, but at night…after the concerts were over, and he was there in his room, he would dream of traveling again, and he’d think of the Stradivarius he had seen for sale in the most renowned music store in Europe, a store right beside the grand hall. She was a beauty…sleek, streamlined, shapely, and after he had touched and fondled her, heard the noise he could bring to life with his flexible fingers, he knew…the time had come to say goodbye. All his savings and more went into purchasing that Stradivarius that fit snuggly under his chin. He could travel with her. She was…lightweight, easy to carry. She was not stationary.....heavy. It was the last concert, and he gave that piano his all. The audience sensed a difference in the man. The room was electrified with the notes of a passion in bursting from the fusion of man and instrument. The piano had never sounded so angelic, sweet, replete with every nuance of a lover’s dream. Something seemed to be tugging at the pianist's heart for before he took his bow, they saw his eyes wet with tears. Years passed, his fame grew. He was now known as the master violinist....the shining star among his contemporaries...one of a kind. He was happy and famous. He was traveling….light. His Stradivarius was his to finger and play with every night, a perfect mistress, a perfect muse, yet why…why did he find himself back in the hall after all this time? He stood there aghast, for all he could see on the stage was the old janitor, sweeping the floor. “Where is she?” he demanded. The janitor squinted at him, trying to remember, and then he gave a sad smile. “Why…didn’t you hear? It was in all the papers. After you left, something went terribly wrong with that grand piano. All the notes kept coming out wrong. It didn’t matter who sat down to play, and to tell you the truth, some of those pianists were even better than you, or so I heard said. Nothing sounded right. They brought professional tuners. Everything seemed alright, but…the music, the music lacked….life. She couldn’t get fixed and so, in the end….she was sold for scrap pieces to a carpenter who hacked her into pieces to use for firewood.” The musician stood there, tears streaming down his face. She had been heavy, her maintenance difficult, her stationary heart, unmovable. He had longed to travel light…to relish minimum maintenance demands, to travel far and wide, like a feather on the breeze…airy and light…oh, so light, but could someone be found who could explain to him the extreme leaded heaviness in his heart that rooted him, immovable, to the spot where once a beautiful grand piano had stood. Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/2/2016 3:31:00 AM
Elegant and passionate as this is, you cover a deep topic in this narrative, between the light and the heavy. This is a masterpiece to me, Eileen. " She made him pour and release his inner soul in notes that vibrated and pulsated within every listener’s heart. Passion redefined. " You've captured a musician's soul well here. I look up to you and your work. Truly sorry about the nasty bloggers - I tend to stay away from that side of the soup, though I will read once in a while. Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/2/2016 3:32:00 AM
Oh, and definitely a FAV! Best piece I've read in a while. : )
Date: 5/30/2016 6:50:00 PM
I am melted :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2016 12:03:00 PM
:) Thank you Arthur. I understand why....I'm glad this has touched your heart. Hugs to you.
Date: 5/29/2016 8:42:00 AM
Yes all is well, no complaints. Another busy week ahead, will be back to Vancouver on Tuesday.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2016 10:41:00 AM
:) Thanks for keeping me updated. Hugs
Date: 5/28/2016 9:19:00 AM
This is one of your best Eileen. I so enjoyed reading it again. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/28/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. My heart and soul was in this piece. Hope all is well. Hugs
Date: 5/28/2016 5:08:00 AM
Brilliant and beautiful story my little Desert Orchid, you write with such an easy to read flow. Love it. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/28/2016 2:01:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. This story has special meaning for me. I'm glad you liked the flow. Having your visit always brings a smile. Hugs, dear. Hugs
Date: 5/27/2016 6:06:00 PM
Excellent narrative, Eileen!! Now my heart weeps for that grand piano that gave her all, but in the end succumbed to the pain of 'betrayal'. Pls...more of the same:) hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/28/2016 2:03:00 PM
She was too high maintenance....some can't handle the attention it needs. Thanks for your visit, dear. Hugs
Date: 5/27/2016 1:50:00 PM
Well well, this is one of my all time favorites Eileen....keep your chin high for you are a treasure.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2016 2:15:00 PM
Thanks, Tim. I appreciate it so much. You are very kind. I'm glad you like it. Hugs
Date: 5/27/2016 12:56:00 PM
Brilliant,just brilliant...and that is all.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, dear.....I'm glad you like it! :)
Date: 5/27/2016 12:43:00 PM
In choosing the high road, I've decided to delete my latest poem. People will believe what they want...and that's Ok. Also...funny enough, people think they can be nasty in blogs, but....God forbid someone should speak about issues in a poem. THAT is bad. Name calling on blogs...put downs...innuendos...that's OK. Anyway...be that what it may, I'm done with it all. If you don't like my poetry...kindly don't read...don't comment...and I will return the favor...and all will be well.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2016 12:04:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur. It means a lot to me. I know who appreciates me and my "simplistic" work and who does not. :) Thank you for being there for me. Hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/30/2016 6:48:00 PM
Are you crazy? Your poetry is like a fine red wine, and I am addicted!!!!

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