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The Funeral

The sandwiches taste of sorrow. Cookies crumble into tears. The coffee is as weak as my knees And I stumble to one of The uncomfortable low chairs Not made to comfort, No arms made to hold. There is endless murmuration Of voices and bodies swirling From photo array to photo array, Exchanging stories and condolences, Memories from so many corners Of a life of many rooms. This room, the last, Has no door from which I will ever be allowed to escape.

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Date: 4/16/2025 1:42:00 AM
I admire your use of imagery in n this poem-“coffee is as weak as my knees” And the last line closed the door for me
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Erin Sim
Date: 4/16/2025 9:30:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to comment on imagery, Bill. I appreciate it!
Date: 4/15/2025 3:02:00 PM
I can feel the emotional pain coming through each line. I vicariously live through your writing. So truly expressed for anyone who has lived through this.
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Erin Sim
Date: 4/15/2025 3:13:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your thoughtful comment, and your time.
Date: 4/15/2025 2:24:00 PM
Allegorically deep, Erin. Nice canvassing flow. One. Peace and love.
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Erin Sim
Date: 4/15/2025 3:13:00 PM
Thank you for responding, Millard. Peace to you.

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