The Funeral

The sandwiches taste of sorrow.
Cookies crumble into tears.
The coffee is as weak as my knees
And I stumble to one of
The uncomfortable low chairs
Not made to comfort,
No arms made to hold.
There is endless murmuration
Of voices and bodies swirling
From photo array to photo array,
Exchanging stories and condolences,
Memories from so many corners
Of a life of many rooms.
This room, the last,
Has no door from which
I will ever be allowed to escape.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Marable Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 1:42 AM
I admire your use of imagery in n this poem-“coffee is as weak as my knees” And the last line closed the door for me
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:30 AM
Thanks for taking the time to comment on imagery, Bill. I appreciate it!
Franceschini Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 3:02 PM
I can feel the emotional pain coming through each line. I vicariously live through your writing. So truly expressed for anyone who has lived through this.
Sim Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 3:13 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your thoughtful comment, and your time.
Lowe Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 2:24 PM
Allegorically deep, Erin. Nice canvassing flow. One. Peace and love.
Sim Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 3:13 PM
Thank you for responding, Millard. Peace to you.
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