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It was dusk when she came slowly across the snow, dusk was in moments and she was ready; her big snowshoe feet made her steps steady, her eyes saw a rabbit and she crept forward low. She had mated as snowflakes floated in the trees, and in the spring her babies would be born; she made a hidden nest of branches torn, and had to eat for her babies all she would seize. Her home was a cold northern forest protected, no longer was she prey for the fur trade; yet her fear of humans will never fade, now, laws allow Lynx to never be neglected. In a leave strewn nest the utter of a low mew, four small kittens wailing like violins; and new life is created and begins, but nature is so cruel and four became two. In the forest there are so many preying shades, and she must leave the nest to hunt rabbit; for at dusk this is her normal habit, when mother returns there is blood on the green blades. The forest has many eyes seeking and waiting, and not all the baby creatures survive; not all the Lynx population will thrive, this part of nature, I will always be hating. ___________________________ January 23, 2019 Poetry/Enclosed Rhyme/The Forest Has Eyes Copyright Protected, ID 19-11107-449-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Enclosed Rhyme sponsor, Emile Pinet Fourth Place

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Date: 11/19/2022 1:56:00 AM
Aw... just loved this Constance... "four small kittens wailing like violins" what a great description... yes, I too don't like that part of nature... but that's the law of nature my friend... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2022 4:44:00 AM
Ani, thank you so much for visiting my older poem so that I can read it again also, and for the compliment hugs
Date: 3/6/2019 6:54:00 AM
I have read your enclosed rhyme work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 3/5/2019 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Due to the exacting rhyme requirements of this form, this contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2019 10:25:00 PM
Emile, thank you for the contest and for my fine placement, hopefully now my poem will get some views and comments !

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