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The Fable Was Not Able

As stories go 
So do souls
They wonder then grow

As cold as snow
Or as fever ant as ice
Men are not mice

In fields of golden wheat; grain 
Lost with out; insane
Forgetting all that was; ingrained

Living souls in stores
Forgetting their chores
They become the board

Life swings back and forth
Mistrust; faith out sourced
Flesh awaiting to be scorched

Saviour's a many, but never a one
Living beneath the threat of a gun
Time awaiting to be undone

Dear old Abe that Faithful one
His brother ascertained, then defamed
He was Cain, not thy brother's keeper 

But an evil creeper 
A vine unfit to be tied
Entangled a web which he is bound

Truly wrapped and then leather bound
Blacken and read; were the words
The Word; bled the color of red

This fabled prince, our lord
Three score and some
Defeated seven thousand and one

And still some will be lost 
Torched along with the moss
For the fable was not Able

To save any one

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/28/2016 7:58:00 PM
amazing poem, Donald. LINDA
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Date: 10/1/2010 12:35:00 PM
Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more great post like this one..Sara
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:16:00 AM
Thought provocating. Welcome to the soup. Drop by me anytime, you are welcome as my friend.
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Date: 9/29/2010 6:53:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope your stay on soup will be fun.. check out the contest scene ..to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/29/2010 10:52:00 AM
welcome 2 poetry soup im also new i quite enjoyed this poem
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:37:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Donald. Wishing you the best in your writing Mikeendeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2010 5:35:00 AM
enjoyed reading your poetry today!
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Date: 9/29/2010 5:18:00 AM
Very creative write with nice rhyming, Donald
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Date: 9/29/2010 3:21:00 AM
your rhyme and meter is excellent and the subject matter interesting..liked it
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Date: 9/29/2010 2:54:00 AM
Interesting and intriguing read. Excellent piece.
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