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Death and dying has me crying The denial of a future to me defiling The riding of the wave of life declining Has my soul and spirt often whining The moments come when it feels close The feeling of pain is what I fear the most The reason of salvation a quiet boast Yet still death would come so close Looking back at what I leave behind To this world I was very kind If I could I'd press rewind But soon concludes the contract I signed I do not mourn what I leave behind A life that was a mystery with a God so kind For some not me He is hard to find So death is promotion and not decline As far as age I was not cheated Long was life and still yet breathing But gone are strengths that I once claimed Yet other new strength are claimed by my brain Who will remember the sound of my name Will those I adopted have something to claim The moments I learned and moments I trained Won't be lost like as to a drain A reunion we are told from young to very old About to unreal and become unsealed Not me my story would reveal But He who loved me and loves me still

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Date: 3/7/2025 8:59:00 PM
As we grow older, thoughts of death come to plague us. We discern the drastic changes in our body... the weakness of mind and brain. This we can't help. But we can overcome fear by believing that with death life never stops but we are reborn into another state, for God remembers each one of us and is eager to see everyone enter a state of bliss. Great poem, dear John.
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Date: 2/21/2025 3:54:00 PM
This is so nice and genuine. I think it's a poem many of getting up there in age. An relate to.
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Date: 2/21/2025 6:14:00 AM
Some wise comments in poetic form about death and dying. I am facing another big O in a short time. I will have lived 8 decades. Our youngest grandson has lived one decade plus 3 years. I like what you said about our passing to be a promotion. I don't know if mine will be a promotion in estate or not, but it will be a beautiful place to see and be able to live in. I don't know what job God will give me up there. Sara K
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