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The Eight In Seventy Two

Ploddingly it took the form Of some dispassionate melody Our wailing voices at crescendo For our undying we mourn With care they traipsed the deck A mass of notions in mind Did ten artlessly disappear or were held by the Atlantic's inside? Still we stood and tried to inform Searchers of our malady That we living men hitherto can presently not be seen Still we stand on Mary's deck To us the world is blind As they neither see nor hear our gestures nor our cries Not all can be explained Not all can we fathom Some presences can't be felt like the eight in seventy two

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Date: 12/29/2022 7:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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