The Clown

The spotlight flashes funny flair on sagged dress,
miniature crimson sun stuck on the porcelain face.
An animated caricature in comical frail human figure
tramps round and round the circus pitch to amuse. 

Sprightly body gyrates in flexed moves of acrobatics,
sleight of hands performs the perfect act of jugglery,
but labored buffoonery of the unfunny fragile clown
falls flat as flakes of stale joke on silent spectators. 

Before the neon lights go out in the last show
the slapsticks peel the paint off his sweaty face.
Unmasking the trail of tears he has long cried
he sings a song on the lyric of his broken heart.

The uproar of laughter explodes in the gallery,
the applause hails the crumbled clown at the abyss.

March 6, 2020
Contest : Clown At The Abyss
Sponsor : Kai Michael Neumann

March 29, 2020
Contest : Strand No 710, Any Theme, Any Form
Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Kauffman Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Sublimal, this poem is filled with emotion, vivid phrasing and poignancy. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Chiri Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Subimal congrats on your top win!;)
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 7:51 PM
you portrayed him so well Subimal i especially like the description of An animated caricature in comical frail human figure' congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Watt Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Nice write, Subimal. "He sings a song on the lyric of his broken heart". - congrats on your win ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 5:35 PM
miniature crimson sun stuck on the porcelain face. A unique description. Congratulations, Subimal!
Neumann Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations and kind wishes, Kai
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:29 PM
- A wonderful poem ... congratulations on your win in Kais contest :) - Take care and stay healthy, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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