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The Clown

The spotlight flashes funny flair on sagged dress, miniature crimson sun stuck on the porcelain face. An animated caricature in comical frail human figure tramps round and round the circus pitch to amuse. Sprightly body gyrates in flexed moves of acrobatics, sleight of hands performs the perfect act of jugglery, but labored buffoonery of the unfunny fragile clown falls flat as flakes of stale joke on silent spectators. Before the neon lights go out in the last show the slapsticks peel the paint off his sweaty face. Unmasking the trail of tears he has long cried he sings a song on the lyric of his broken heart. The uproar of laughter explodes in the gallery, the applause hails the crumbled clown at the abyss. March 6, 2020 Contest : Clown At The Abyss Sponsor : Kai Michael Neumann March 29, 2020 Contest : Strand No 710, Any Theme, Any Form Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 3/29/2020 6:18:00 PM
Sublimal, this poem is filled with emotion, vivid phrasing and poignancy. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 3/29/2020 10:48:00 AM
Subimal congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 3/24/2020 7:51:00 PM
you portrayed him so well Subimal i especially like the description of An animated caricature in comical frail human figure' congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/24/2020 6:39:00 PM
Nice write, Subimal. "He sings a song on the lyric of his broken heart". - congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 3/24/2020 5:35:00 PM
miniature crimson sun stuck on the porcelain face. A unique description. Congratulations, Subimal!
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Date: 3/24/2020 1:32:00 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations and kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/24/2020 1:29:00 PM
- A wonderful poem ... congratulations on your win in Kais contest :) - Take care and stay healthy, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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