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The Clanking Chain of Wild Geese

The Clanking Chain of Wild Geese I was watching the September sky every day, With a hope to once again get a glance, Of the clanking chains of those lovely wild geese, That suddenly appears with their music melodies, But quietly they disappear every year, Like a Rainbow that comes and gets lost gradually. No one knows when like a rainbow, The wild geese would appear suddenly, While changing their forms like clouds in the sky, Mesmerizing our eyes for few seconds or more, and then, Disappearing in the sky, like the dim vanishing evening. The wild geese often appear in the sky, Forming a shape like the garland of God, And quickly changing shapes, like our emotions, While moving in the sky like an arrow, They sing the joyous songs of today, not tomorrow. Forgetting the past and the future like an arrow, Which keeps running, until it reaches its marrow, The destination to pierce a heart, They create either a joy or sorrow, While singing a song of today, not tomorrow. Oh, September sky I watch,wonder with , And hope to see them once again, My childhood friends wild Geese, Coming from north and vanishing in south, Like my thoughts which arise and fall. But this year, I did not see the winged necklaces of God, Neither could I see a rainbow being formed, Nor even hear their chorus like songs, No clanking of wings, No music of their joys, No rise and fall of images like thoughts, No sounds and music touching my heart. One day, I was stunned to hear, The species of goose are in great danger, Man has stolen many of even God’s necklaces, The rainbow of birds and the grandeur of sky, A great heritage of Nature is vanishing before our eyes. Oh, my sweet friend, Will I ever be able to see and hear you again? When you would clank your wings, in the windless sky, Creating a dance and music, on such lofty heights, Where no musician can ever fly, With a hope till I am here on this earth my friend, I would keep waiting and watching For you O wild Geese in the September sky. Ravindra Kanpur India. 1st Oct. 2010 Dedicated to my loving wife Dr. Shashi Kapoor, as a birthday gift for her Birthday on 2nd Oct. who loves animals and birds more than any thing Else.

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Date: 1/12/2012 8:44:00 PM
An amazingly beautiful verse Ravi, "the winged necklace of God" is a line that could only come from a poet's heart. I love this about the gees, they fly south here in Canada too. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:36:00 AM
Soup Mail Ravi ;)
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:50:00 AM
Dear Ravindra, I am traveling so please forgive me for not viewing this sooner. It's truly a beautiful description of the Wild Geese filling the fall sky as they migrate south for the winter. We have the pleasure of seeing them in the Northeastern States. A wonderful dedication to your wife! It goes to my favorites Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:11:00 AM
Ravindra ... many blessings on your wifes birthday may she have many more ... absolutely beautiful tribute and gift for her birthday ... thank you for your kind words on my poem .. namaste love Jayne
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Date: 10/2/2010 11:49:00 PM
This is awesome, Ravindra. may I ask you something?? I see this was just written by you and it is dedicated to a woman, your wife. All this time I have believed YOU to be a woman. My goodness!! YOu are a man?? You write with such beauty, I find it very unusual in a man! Luv,Andrea PS I am accustomed to the Spanish language where men's names finish in O and women's in A. Hmmm, must be different in india!!
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Date: 10/2/2010 4:37:00 AM
Well, my friend, you have at least 3 poems here, soft smile. If you would like to discuss the form more soup mail me. Thank you for all your kindness, do you know because you are so kind, I did not realize you were a man. Goodness, takes a bit of knowledge to get use to the gender differences in foriegn names! BIG HUGS...Light & Love
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Date: 10/2/2010 1:40:00 AM
What a beautiful birthday poem you have written for your wife. Sadly, mankind has not cherished the beautiful gifts from God...His wildlife. I love the imagery of the geese as "...the necklaces of God." I can clearly see a string of geese waving through the heavens...and then, forming an arrow. Tell her Happy Birthday from Florida, USA. Blessings to you and your family. Sincerely, Dane
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:17:00 PM
Such and Beautiful but sad vivid image you have put in my mind.I am happy you have reminded us of the evolution of man and how we are destroying our own home.And when i read poems likes these my heart gets weigh down with despair for it is so sad to see how we have lost our way.Thank Ravindra for your eloquent insightful words,Love Jamaica
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:00:00 PM
An extremely visual and vibrant picture u have painted with your pen during the creative process of your poetry Ravindra my friend... the expressions in your lines is exquisite and the sound of the geese are almost audible.. we have very few left in New Jersey but they are a joy to see and hear at times.. lovely as always.. what a beautiful birthday gift for your lovely wife.. enjoy a happy day together..luv..
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Date: 10/1/2010 12:06:00 PM
I have stopped back to thank you for your always kind comments Ravindra. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Ravindra. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 10:37:00 AM
(( continue )) I enjoy things like this beautiful poem, and the image of the chain while the geese are in flight is out of this world. A truly awesome way to remember our beautiful skies and flights. Geese are a magnificent, enjoyed your poetry,..POET D
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Date: 10/1/2010 10:36:00 AM
Beautiful, Ravindra the imagery is absolutely marvelous. A wonderful gift and dedication for your wife to receive on her lovely birthday. I myself am a Libra. Ravindra, I read your latest comment. I hope you don't think I'm a bad poet. I honestly only write slam, because it is a poetry challenge. I'm a sweet 35 year old women, love and treasure the beauty of life. But, slam is just an expression of inner thoughts. (( continue ))
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:20:00 AM
Enjoyed the reading of your work...I, too enjoy seeing the geese each spring and fall...We have some that stay here year around for some reason...Good many about 20 or 25 in pod..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:12:00 AM
Yes , Ravindra, I have often the seen Geese forming a shape like a garland of God. I enjoyed your pen flowing in tune with the thoughts coming out in abundance. I add this to my fav
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:35:00 AM
Very much enjoyed your work today...Michael
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