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The Cardinal and the Rose

The Cardinal, who loved a Rose
appeared to woo her one spring morn
but came too near a hidden thorn,
so eager she should hear his prose

He lit to sing but quick arose,
blood slick upon the wing he'd torn

She may as well have pierced his heart,
yet being a tenacious bird,
the Cardinal was not deterred
from love of his fierce counterpart

Though still he bled, he did impart
his song and once the Rose had heard,
he flew, unsteady, to the eave
lay down his head and took his leave

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Date: 1/3/2023 10:45:00 AM
An intriguing sonnet outlay, Lycia, of the affected subject--pleased to have read my friend, Aloha William
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Lycia Harding
Date: 1/4/2023 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, William! I find Sonnets somewhat odd, or akward in flow but I like to try them, now and again

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