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The Bee Fields of Yesteryear

Casting my mind back many a year To childhood days spent catching bees Those long gone memories do bring a tear Playing with friends in the summer breeze A simple jam jar, air holes pierced in the lid Laden with clover and blades of green grass To catch a bumblebee, shear delight for a kid Observing him carefully through the transparent glass Like little scientists we named differing species Terminology I can still recall to this day What a pleasure it is to remember these Adventure along the hills was our kind of play It saddens me today to see young minds so numbed Lush fields of green devoured and disappeared To technology, children have now succumbed Our beautiful world has been commandeered Whilst walking upon a small meadow of green I spotted a young boy with a glass jar in his hand My eyes were aghast at what I’d just seen It seems there’s still hope upon the land I watched from afar as he examined his catch closely Suddenly releasing him and away he did fly With a loving smile, the boy waved him off joyfully As I meandered off into the distance, wiping a tear from my eye

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Date: 11/11/2023 9:16:00 PM
A touching story, not seen much in today's world, Lee. Sad state of affairs. Thanks for sharing your memories from your past that many of us can relate too, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Lee Geoghegan
Date: 11/12/2023 1:24:00 AM
Hi, Bill, yes the modern world brings so much sadness for me, thanks for taking the time to read the poem, how I miss playing in the fields with friends.
Date: 9/28/2023 1:33:00 PM
Aye lad, good rhymin'. And welcome to PS
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Lee Geoghegan
Date: 9/29/2023 12:24:00 AM
Thank you Tom, I appreciate your comment, cheers
Date: 9/24/2023 10:53:00 AM
the imagery in this poem is breath taking, you obviously like me are a nature lover my play ground was East Africa (8-!8) but I visited Ireland when I was 15 truly Magical keep writing you have a great talent hugs Shadow
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Lee Geoghegan
Date: 9/24/2023 12:35:00 PM
Hi Shadow, thanks so much for your very kind feedback, I’m so happy you enjoyed the poem, yes I am a real nature lover, I try to make that shine through in my poetry. Thanks again.
Date: 9/20/2023 3:43:00 AM
Hello, Lee Geoghegan - I really-really like all that imagery, your Irish accent I can hear it, now that is trans forming your readers to memorable life moments -awesome- I like it all and: "As I meandered off into the distance, wiping a tear from my eye"
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Lee Geoghegan
Date: 9/20/2023 3:49:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words Perry, I’m delighted that you enjoyed the poem, I miss walking in the fields as a kid catching bees in my jar, good times!

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