Home » Poems » Andrea Dietrich » The Beast of Our Making

Andrea Dietrich | + Follow Poet |

The Beast of Our Making

slick oil spills to sea a sickened beast rises up. . . Heaven can't help us

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Kash Poet

Date: 2/2/2011 11:14:00 AM

These disasters are very common now and nobody can help us.Nice Senryu--kashinath

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/7/2010 10:20:00 PM

now that sounds frightening.lol.thanks for the history lesson, thats pretty cool, a big year to live up to.somthing i wouldn't know about, thats for sure.i'd rather learn that piece of history about Walt Disney and disneyland than the cold war any day! -AlwaysForever Lynette

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/4/2010 11:50:00 PM

This is super...well done. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2010 8:20:00 PM

Congrats on the win

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2010 5:56:00 PM

You've got that right Andrea, "Beast Of Our Making", Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2010 5:48:00 PM

Very timely, Andrea.....considering the news of late...this seems to fit the picture well! Congratulations, and nice to share the 5th place with you,...that in itself is an honor for me:)!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2010 5:36:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your winning poem in this contest.. an awesome write and win for u to enjoy my friend... great analogy of the photo... with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/4/2010 4:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea. I really like your poem! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 7:19:00 AM

great one!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/3/2010 3:42:00 AM

This is so right on, Andrea! & very timely! We should learn to clean up our own mess, nature has suffered too much already...

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2010 6:52:00 PM

GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST. ENJOYED IT ANDRE. TERRIBLE REVENGE NATURE TAKES IN THE WATERS, ALL THANKS 2 MAN KIND,,IRMA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 6:52:00 PM

sorry for comming back to this one knowing you have so many nice ones,(s.m.)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 6:46:00 PM

one more thing, let me remind you this is by far the best one to day. Andrea, where do i go for the (c.),..kiddo,p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 6:44:00 PM

i came back to this one, boy do i love disasters . i also want you there with me in the 100,hots, later Poet Queen. from the kiddo,p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 6:41:00 PM

i love Gert's comment you wrote the best disaster so far, so far, so far, sorry my key got stuck,..p.d

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/2/2010 5:29:00 PM

Maybe we can get help form somewhere else. I hope you are well and happy. Yours Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/2/2010 2:21:00 PM

Great words for the depiction of the photo .. good luck .. this one is certain to obtain a spot in the winners circle... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/2/2010 10:15:00 AM

Yes, what a disaster! It's nature's answer to its explotation by man!...Great Senryu and I wish you good luck for the contest...Thanks for commenting my write...Wishing you well...Gert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2010 10:03:00 AM

Good way to look at the picture with present day events...That oil spill is an evil demon alright...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sesqipedalianism means using long words when a shorter one would work just fine...Or using a word a foot and one-half long..Or many syllables...Sara

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/1/2010 9:35:00 PM

Powerful Senryu! Good luck in the contest.