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The Banana Flowers

Two larks fight circling the dangling banana flowers The old uncle Harold with the palm on the chin looks at and smiles The children walking to their school gurgling and giggling __________________________________________________________ May 30, 2018

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Date: 5/31/2018 4:27:00 PM
I can see the two larks and children walking smiling.. hugs eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/3/2018 5:35:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 5/30/2018 11:50:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Probir! A joy to read :) xomo!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/3/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
Date: 5/30/2018 9:43:00 AM
Charming Sijo, Probir. A whole scene distilled. // Barry.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/30/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Barry ...

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