The Sailor Moon

SAILOR   MOON     


Sailor  moon  is rising proud
‘Neath  her sky  of  stars and cloud
A silvery moonlit  trail  she sends
To help us find the far  seas’  ends

Then  scudding fast from cloud to cloud,  
She’ll  wait  behind each  darkening shroud,
Light our craft,  our  bobbing cork,
And watch our small boat  like  a  hawk.
 
Our  silver  ropes'   lulling song -
The  creamy sails drink in  her  strong
Steady shine  -  and  all   the  crew  -
Oh,  Jason, Franklin - they  all  knew 

The  creamy foam,  the prow going home
From  passage icy  up   to Nome,  
Adieu  the Sirens of  Anthemusa.   
Sleepless dolphin  lead their cruiser.

The creamy wake behind the  stern  
Shows  her where we made a turn 
Like  Bounty, Santa Maria, Argo,  
Bearing  only   her  moonlight cargo. 

*~~~~~~~Jason in the Odessy/Explorer Franklin died 1847 Arctic Canada
* ~~~ ~~~Nome = town in Alaska
*  ~~~~~~the Sirens lived on island Anthemusa
* ~~~ ~~~Bounty, etc. = ships of Bligh, Columbus and Jason

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/4/2010 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sydney in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on you awesome win in the contest, Sydney! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/30/2010 8:13:00 AM
Sydney, I like the way you wove history and even mythology into your poem about the Sailor's moon. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:15:00 PM
VERY nice one on the same topic I chose to do too! Congratulatons. You described wonderfully a sailor's moon! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:34:00 PM
Lovely win. Congratulations and thank you for the history lesson. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations Sydney on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/29/2010 5:52:00 PM
Congrats Sidney on your super win in the Harvest Moon contest... enjoy your sweet victory tonight for this awesome poem with luv..
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:46:00 AM
I'm smiling...don'tput the definitions IN the body of the verse list them after an asterick at the end of the verse. Here how. On the left of the page you will see in the Member Area, My Poems (click) your verse will come up this should be 1st on the list, scan/scroll to the far right of that page and lined up with the name SAILORS MOON will be 2 words Edit/Delete, click on edit, fix what you want, scroll down & hit APPLY HUGS!!
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:30:00 AM
Well written and very picturesque!
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