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dashed to pieces on day of celebration. shards of antiques dishandled, cracked and abused. pieces of mother-daughter bond. I can’t cry; tearbowl-eyes. always collecting myself. mom would say, “Stop that, Kimmy…” the glass shelf fell couple days before though Dad heard the crash he didn’t glance at the curio tea party event before the cock crows. a royal wedding; mom with her daughters, swag and fascinators, blossoming teacups and saucers - great-grandma’s china heart broken in so many pieces mom wanted me to have this collection what would cause this eruption… 9/13/2021

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Date: 9/13/2021 11:48:00 AM
How sad ... you always want those treasures intact ... for sentimental reasons; but things happen... Hugs, Marilene
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 8:38:00 PM
Already over it. So many things are more important. Thanks. ~ hugs
Date: 9/13/2021 10:24:00 AM
Oh so sad for such a treasure of collections to be broken...but sometimes it happens. ..loved this Kim... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 10:31:00 AM
It does. Might be able to repair some.
Date: 9/13/2021 9:10:00 AM
Oh what a pity that you should lose such a collection of your dear mother. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 10:31:00 AM
I know…right?! Worse to lose mom ~ perspective
Date: 9/13/2021 4:56:00 AM
So sorry to hear that happened Kim on what should have been a happy event. Things like that hold sentimental value and evoke happy memories. Dispite what happened your love for your Mom and her love for you remains intact, the bond never to be broken. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 5:00:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! I soldier up. What is most important isn’t material but it does evoke sadness. God bless!
Date: 9/13/2021 4:23:00 AM
Unique beautiful poetry and presentation. Best wishes. Regards, sk.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 5:00:00 AM
Thank you, Sanjay!

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