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T-Ball

T-ball By Dane Smith-Johnsen Baseball day, the t-ball way Was funning in the sun. Where parents’ shouts Cheered away doubts. And little boys had fun.

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Daver Austin

Date: 5/1/2012 8:46:00 AM

NIce rhyme, and about kids. Loving those who know how to have fun. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 5/1/2012 7:34:00 AM

Nice Dane..Wonderful work and congrats on feature....Patrick

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2012 6:00:00 AM

Well written Dane Ann - Have a lovely week. - oxox Anne-Lise

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/11/2009 8:51:00 AM

A great way to start a young child out. He or she doesn't need to be athletic, just have some fun. Congrats on being one of the winners. Vince

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/11/2009 7:07:00 AM

congrats on your win in Matt's contest! Dane! just a lovely, simply gorgeous rhyme! jim

Brian Strand

Date: 7/11/2009 1:21:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Dane .Rgds Brian

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/10/2009 2:32:00 PM

Congrads on your win my friend. Light & Love and please join the story for Rhonda in my blog...she's sick and we're trying to cheer her up!

Date: 7/10/2009 1:57:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your third place finish in Matt's contest to my other comment. Keep on writing! Enjoy your honor. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/10/2009 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem, Dane Ann! ~ love, Carrie

Cecil Hickman

Date: 6/17/2009 9:01:00 PM

a delightful read written in true sportsmanship and the glory of having fun,,blessings..Cecil

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/17/2009 3:17:00 PM

I like this little piece because of what it says. In light of what goes on today with out of control parents at Little League games ; fistfights and the espicable like, it is refreshing to read something that reaffirms what it should be! Thank you! Thank you for your kind remarks about my contest entry. I appreciate them. Regards, GK

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/15/2009 3:41:00 AM

I Love The Ending.So Perfect 4 The Poem:)And Flowing

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/14/2009 4:55:00 PM

I'm smilin!!! 1 sugestion..present tense...Cheer away doubts....and little boys had fun on the run! Light & Love & thanks SOOOOOOOO much for the congrads!

John Rhinem

Date: 6/13/2009 2:55:00 AM

Smile~I remember the innocence of T-ball....It is very nice that "You" paint such a peaceful and pleasant picture for everyone to read, "Blessed, Gifted & Priceless Dane Ann!!!":):)~But wholesome is within "Your Brightened Heart~And "You" could do no less, even if "You" wished too!!?:):)~Smile, and that is why "You" are so wonderful to have here at poetry soup~Because "You Shine!!!":):)~"Many Blessings & Much Warmth To You & Your Loves, Always, John!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day!!!":):) Bye ~

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/12/2009 12:24:00 PM

Those sure were the days. Delightful. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 6/12/2009 4:32:00 AM

Hi, Dane Ann. Carolyn Devonshire called last night to tell me she will be gone from the soup for about a week bacause of need to help a friend. She wanted me to be sure to tell you. Would you kndly pass it on to Carolyn's friends. I like your poem. Love, daver

James Fraser

Date: 6/11/2009 4:42:00 PM

Nothing beats watching kids playing and enjoying themselves, lovely Rhyme Dane>James

Date: 6/11/2009 4:40:00 PM

Good clean fun. I remember my bother's days in T-ball and many others playing ball with the neighborhood kids. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/11/2009 4:39:00 PM

Thank you for your comment it has found a resting place in my heart.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2009 4:10:00 PM

I seeeeeeeeee it. I love baseball. only if I am playing it! joyfull imagery! Light & Love

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/11/2009 4:07:00 PM

Dane, I can smell the fresh-cut grass & the clay infield! well done! Jim

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/11/2009 4:06:00 PM

The days of innocence...children being children..such a pure time.