Sybil

It was said I was born of quenched love,
almost vanquished by a storm along
the Red Sea in a  din of gray  November.
Wandering around  dunes, a Maiden
kind housed me comfortably--
O she, laughing among lilies in the quiet
and wild  current; nourishing my psyche
with keen sensibilities.

Time passed between  rain and light, 
as  I  crossed  Earth and Heaven with a sacred 
power of a growing woman that clutched 
the mystery of unknown incidences…
And when bells of a day's time have played out,
visions sailed in my mind--
that  our King drew  counsel  from  my foresight
warmed by an esoteric fire that burned, 
speaking of prophecies and omens  vouched–
this higher instinct streaming  from ‘ Maiden Mother’
who opened a celestial gateway that betook me.

So  the tale of a Priestess newly arisen
where legend's moments fell on a gliding leaf;
a story half told of my  telepathic gift
of mortal beings honoring  me, ‘Sybil, Sybil’: 

yet, though  revered as a sage, my own destiny 
was not mine to hold. 
Not even where I truly  came from.




Create A Character Contest
7/7/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/12/2017 9:40:00 PM
Nette, fabulous and very creative story congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 7/12/2017 2:42:00 PM
Great write and win Nette...Congrats
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:53:00 AM
Great story telling, I like you character, congrats on your win. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/11/2017 10:57:00 PM
Quite an enchanting poem, Nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/7/2017 8:01:00 PM
A thoroughly thrilling read; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/7/2017 12:33:00 AM
Very cool Dramatic Monologue, Nette. You painted Sybil for me, and I, as audience, couldr see her . Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/6/2017 9:21:00 PM
I love what you did with this contest prompt. Great monolog.
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:39:00 PM
Nette, you always leave me breathless with your work. You are such a talented and amazing poet. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 7/6/2017 1:14:00 PM
You cast a magical spell with this resplendent work. The last lines beg for a part 2, dear Priestess of Poetry! Soup mail.
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Date: 7/6/2017 12:58:00 PM
- A beautiful vision, described in your lovely lines Nette - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/6/2017 12:32:00 PM
I just love reading your poems, nette. This one is no exception. Good luck! By the way, have you ever seen that movie, Sybil?
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