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Sun -Moon

Journey of the sun on a path around heaven... gives both night and day. Oh moon of desire shines upon this world of love... sinners share the light. Clement moon rising this conflict of interest... sun rises again. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 5:05:00 AM

Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 2/1/2012 2:03:00 AM

Congrats on your win harry......spandan

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/31/2012 2:15:00 PM

Nicely done, Harry. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/30/2012 8:36:00 PM

Hi! my sweet friend, loved and enjoyed your win by giving congratulation to you, bl

David Williams

Date: 1/30/2012 4:31:00 PM

Harry my friend congrats on your win, a Yorkshire moon eh..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 3:52:00 PM

a splendid poem for the splendid journey of my king sun!! Congratulations. NIce to come across this one at last!

Jon Arno

Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Harry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 1:21:00 PM

congrats Harry on success in my contest .. extraordinary entry luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2012 8:47:00 AM

thankxx Harry for supporting my contest luv.. good luck.. know your entry will amaze me ..as always..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2012 11:31:00 PM

Harry, a wonder pack ...Linda, will love them all... good luck in the contest... , have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd

M.I.A .

Date: 1/26/2012 7:43:00 PM

very romantic. a winner for me Harry, good luck

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/26/2012 10:38:00 AM

I am definitely reading brilliant entries for Linda's contest, I don't know how she'll judge this.., I really like how you gave this a slightly scientific yet more spiritual approach... way to go for you, Harry :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 7:42:00 PM

well, YOU sure shone with THIS set, Harry. I love it!!

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/25/2012 1:01:00 PM

Wonderful haiku Harry, good luck in the contest, love Elizabeth

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2012 10:49:00 AM

I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing Harry. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/25/2012 8:39:00 AM

The light from celestial bodies shine beatifully in your verse Harry. This subject is a favorite of mine and I really feel the mood you create with this lovely poem.