Summer's Hot Burns Up In Heated Sweat-

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Heat stroke vs. heat exhaustion: Differences and treatment

I walk the heated grounds the sidewalk wales it's boil
summer burns it boils heat
raging is the air heated up to 100 degrees
sweat rolls down my brow
boils burns the summer heat
dripping down my unto my shoulders
ringing wet in sweat you think I've just left the pool
hot as hades
I can't wait until October the month its starts to get colder



6/24/21
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2021©

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