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Summer Evening

power cut on a summer evening..... dripping wax

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/24/2011 8:36:00 PM

ahhhh very good..now just NO title..use line 1 as the title ex: [---power cut] we miss your input on the haiku site! light & love

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/22/2011 7:20:00 AM

Super observation, very well put.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/19/2011 7:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement!!!!!!!===Lori

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 10:11:00 AM

CONGRATS KASH ON HM IN BRIAN'S CONTEST WITH LOVELY LINES OF BEAUTY MY FRIEND..LUV.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2011 8:21:00 AM

i like this one as commented before, kashi... congrats all the way! :) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/18/2011 8:04:00 AM

I think I shall sponsor a contest entitled, Let's give Kash a new PS nickname.".the way things are looking now, I believe "Bengali Lover" might win first prize. You are great at these romantic writes!! Been fun catching up on your latest works, friend. Gwendolen