Sucks

To be these days on the front line                            sucks
but also, to be last in line                                         sucks
to get hit from behind when you are at a stop sign     sucks                                               
A sour grape (not just one on a vine)                         sucks
Pandemic’s closing of your favorite place to dine          sucks
To be a cat on life number nine                                  sucks
To be so sick you always must recline                          sucks
To learn one’s cult  is not divine                                    sucks
During Xmas time especially, to be allergic to pine           sucks
To see those protesting destroying your beloved shrine     sucks
To want hard liquor when there’s only sweet red wine       sucks
To want red wine when all you find is moonshine               sucks
To learn your faux fur coat is made from an exotic feline    sucks
Asked to explain a word you used (but can’t even define)    sucks
To never be able on issues with your partner to align           sucks
To have to be with people who act like swine                       sucks
To be a someone who lacks a spine                                      sucks
For you to have to listen to me whine                                    sucks
To have to stay inside your house confined                            sucks
For me to end this poem with two near-rhymes really really     sucks

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Aug. 10, 2020 for the "It Sucks" Poetry contest

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Date: 8/12/2020 6:04:00 AM
Great Job Andrea! I love your work and I'm sure it will place in the top. well done my friend.
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Date: 8/12/2020 12:17:00 AM
True, Andrea, all these things make us go grrr & ugh ... but your comic-serious monorhyme definitely does NOT suck! Creative, to say the least. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 8/11/2020 6:20:00 PM
To be vacuuming a rug with a vacuum that doesn't.....
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Date: 8/11/2020 12:52:00 PM
Very uncomfortable circumstances sucks...I always wondered why such an important word became a negative...
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Date: 8/11/2020 9:47:00 AM
GIGGLES GALORE ;D,
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Date: 8/11/2020 7:51:00 AM
With perfection in 18 lines, you are more than forgiven Andrea. Don’t be hard on yourself. I’m sure you could amend the penultimate line to use ‘confine’. But then you would lose the acid twist in the tail. (Or is it ‘tale’?).Seriously (or not) your poem is delightfully sardonic.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2020 11:23:00 AM
thanks, and the near rhymes were deliberate so that I could end it how I did!
Date: 8/11/2020 6:45:00 AM
- It SUCKS :)))))) - Best wishes in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/11/2020 6:38:00 AM
Quit your whining, Andrea, sometimes life just SUCKS... I enjoyed your poem my friend, I found some of your lines to be quite humorous. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Date: 8/11/2020 4:34:00 AM
This is quite comprehensive and true to real life Andrea. A winner for me.
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Date: 8/11/2020 2:09:00 AM
Ha ha! This was fun, Andrea, so well written:)
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:57:00 PM
For me to end this poem with two near-rhymes really really sucks...Interesting write Andrea.. Great entry.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:48:00 PM
"A cat on life number nine" is my favorite. Also the red wine/moonshine and being allergic to pine at Christmas. And I can just see you cringing at the near-rhymes, but they really make your ending perfect. I laughed throughout; I smell a sucky winner, haha ~ John
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:13:00 PM
Lol, Andrea, difficulty met with ease, sweet, hoping for the best, Aloha! William
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